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Chapter 1 - Unopened

um...well i dont wanna ruin this by explaining it so if u dont get it and u want me to explain it just ask...

Chapter 1 - Unopened

Chapter 1 - Unopened
Somewhere in the world
There is a building.
In the building,
There is a room
With contents unknown
Rested between
Two massive chambers.
The hallways emanating
From the room
Spread to the outermost limits
Of the building.
There is a door
To the room
Secured by chain
And bound by lock
The key to which
Resides with a solitary soul
Who remains unaware
Of the property to which
She has been endowed.
Consequently,
The door remains sealed,
While the walls begin
To crumble.
The building grows
Old and fragile,
And the room enters
A state of disrepair.
The walls and ceiling
Push and pull on the room
Until it shatters
And the crimson-shaded carpet
Held within the room
Flows throughout the building
Until it can flow
No more.
 

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Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 5:43:12 AM

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Invader_Mirawow...I...how do you do this? Its incredible the vivid pictures you create with all your work...no Im not kissing up XD Im being serious...And YES I will comment on everything...because work of such awesomeness deserves to be commented on...and faved. FAVS*

luckylace222 on October 29, 2007, 7:22:52 AM

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luckylace222xD I like the ending of this one. "NO ENDING." Nice.

xStandStrongx on October 28, 2007, 11:24:17 AM

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xStandStrongxpretty ur a very good writer keep up such an amazing job

xEmotional on October 20, 2007, 11:36:47 AM

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xEmotionalWow, you have a talent for writing ;]

sexxygirl93 on October 20, 2007, 4:31:39 AM

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sexxygirl93omg ur so amazing amazing....

KelekiahGaladrian on October 18, 2007, 7:20:32 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianKel: Wow, that is awesome. I agree with Yori-chan; I wish I could write poetry like that.

YoriXYamiForever on October 17, 2007, 3:02:06 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverYori: Wow... dang. I wish I could write poetry like this! ^^

Blackwolfmoon on October 17, 2007, 12:38:05 PM

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Blackwolfmoon=D omg!!!!  i luv it! the girl in the poem reminds me of myself for the longest time... *hugs and give u a cookie* ur so good at poetry! *another fav*