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Chapter 1 - Revenge

Well this is just something that i had to do for English class, and i figured, what the heck, I'll put it on here. So i did. Its probably not too good though, its all manufactured emotion...tell me what you think anyway lol

Chapter 1 - Revenge

Chapter 1 - Revenge
How do you expect me to stand
This much pain, pain you caused?
Did you really think I would do nothing?
That I would let you escape unscathed?
I know that I can cause no physical pain
That will be revenge enough for this;
But still I will try,
For it will hurt that much more
To know that you never felt pain
For what you did.
I know I cannot sever your heart
As you did mine,
But I can still torment your mind,
Reminding you of all you’ve done,
The hopes you have crushed,
The dreams you’ve destroyed,
And the souls you have
Ripped into a thousand pieces.
But no, even now you feel no pain,
At least not enough to matter to me.
I have determined that there is
Only one way to end this;
And that is in your ending.
So now I take this dagger of tears
And plunge it through your chest.

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Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 6:48:45 AM

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Invader_MiraHow do you manage to convey every emotion I've ever felt EVER in words on a page?! Its like...you're inside me...MY HEAD I mean...not just me in general...that would be weird XD oops.

FAVS***

wolfmoon on November 6, 2007, 10:52:39 AM

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wolfmoonWow, I feel that way about alot of people at my school, I usually just feed them to that thing that lives in the lake in my neighborhood though........

YoriXYamiForever on October 30, 2007, 2:08:06 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverWow, talk about writing that jumps off the page. SO full of emotion! I love it!

uchihagirl on October 28, 2007, 1:08:42 PM

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uchihagirlO.O amazing

KelekiahGaladrian on October 24, 2007, 9:19:42 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianKel: *in complete shock* OH MY GOSH!! THAT'S AMAZING!!! I LOVE IT!!!!

sexxygirl93 on October 23, 2007, 8:21:49 AM

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sexxygirl93o wow i luve the way u wrote this,,,so amazing

Blackwolfmoon on October 23, 2007, 8:05:46 AM

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Blackwolfmoonwow o.O'  that's good.. your poems r soo much better than mine ^^

xEmotional on October 23, 2007, 8:03:07 AM

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xEmotionalwow, that's full of feeling .
nicely done, as always ;]

bookworm369 on October 23, 2007, 8:04:56 AM

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bookworm369really? i just did it for  group poetry assignment...but thanks lol