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Chapter 1 - Pain

XD Definitely not one of my better works...but its ok...comment please^^

Chapter 1 - Pain

Chapter 1 - Pain
Floating in the darkness
I am alone,
Save the lost souls
And tormented spirits
That swim around me,
Crying out for help.
I try to reach out
And comfort them,
But I cannot.
I am restricted
By my own fears;
By my own pain.
I look on as
They scream in pain;
My heart tears in two
As I begin to recognize
These hapless souls.
They are the souls
Of those I care about
Swirling around me
In a torrential hurricane
Of pain, suffering,
And misfortune.
My soul cries out to them,
I want to join them,
But I am condemned
To forever be imprisoned
In this corporeal vessel.
I know I will never
Be free of pain:
I only want to lessen it;
To fly among the dead.

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wolfmoon on November 6, 2007, 10:47:52 AM

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wolfmoonYuo aren't suicidal are you?

bookworm369 on November 6, 2007, 11:30:46 AM

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bookworm369and what if i am? o.O...(no...not yet)

Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 6:23:17 AM

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Invader_MiraOh wow. I think I'm in love! -huggles u- I wish I could things like this....I'd be famous by now! XD

FAVS***

uchihagirl on November 5, 2007, 7:56:23 AM

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uchihagirlamazing as always ^^ *huggs yet again*

KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 6:44:53 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianOuch. That held a lot of emotion. But ouch. I like it though. Good job!

DawnAngel on November 4, 2007, 5:20:31 AM

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DawnAngelGod! you're good at this stuff!!
I loved it... you know what you're doing so keep at it!
=3

eriepilot44 on November 3, 2007, 11:59:29 PM

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eriepilot44that is verry talented.

i am in awe.

LoveWolves on November 3, 2007, 11:38:04 PM

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LoveWolvesCool I love it ^^

sexxygirl93 on November 3, 2007, 11:19:08 AM

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sexxygirl93wow greatness like allways big bruder
love all the pain its like i Feel wat ur saying
*xHUGGx*

Blackwolfmoon on November 3, 2007, 11:08:27 AM

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Blackwolfmoonvery nice J.T very nice

YoriXYamiForever on November 3, 2007, 11:07:54 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverI love it! As usual! ^^ It reminds me of Hades's pool of souls. Full of feeling and pain (no pun intended) Keep it up! More! ^^