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Chapter 1 - Time

Uh....no idea what to say about this one XD But um....yea^^'' Comment please....or I'll eat you T_T

Chapter 1 - Time

Chapter 1 - Time
A broken bone,
And a heart to match.
A forfeited dream
And a lost cause.
They say that
Times heals everything.
But follow me, please,
Through the events
Of every day,
And find out how wrong
They are.
A hospital bed,
Newly emptied.
But its patient
Has not gone home,
A disease,
Though minor,
Has progressed with time,
Leading to its final stage.
A garden,
No longer full
Of the beauty
Which once filled it.
The flowers,
Though once beautiful,
Have wilted away in time.
A firework,
Though it once
Sparkled gloriously,
Is now nothing more
Than ashes,
Scattered on the ground.
Time does not heal everything
Time leads to the grave.

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hinatagurl123 on March 26, 2008, 3:03:07 PM

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hinatagurl123i relate very much to this poem

KitKat15Sora on March 22, 2008, 2:01:42 PM

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KitKat15Sorakewl

Falconlobo on March 13, 2008, 5:41:02 PM

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Falconlobonicely woreded

Blackwolfmoon on February 2, 2008, 1:20:04 AM

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Blackwolfmoonthis poem tells the truth.....i like how u wrote this one ^^

KelekiahGaladrian on January 31, 2008, 5:59:39 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianSo... you'll eat me if I don't comment huh... well, I'll just have to comment then. I like it. It's so true. How ironic, we both have a poem titled Time. Awesome! Of course, yours makes much more sense.