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Chapter 1 - Valentine

Happy Valentine's Day Vee ^^ <3

Chapter 1 - Valentine

Chapter 1 - Valentine
All my life
They tell me
How useless I've become,
Cursed to live
Half a life,
Born deaf, blind, and dumb.
They kick me
When I'm down,
They push me when I stand.
They punish me
For not following
Every one of their commands.
The rage that
Builds inside me,
That cannot be contained,
Will no doubt end
In pure white souls
Contracting bloody stains.
The questions and
Thoughts that haunt me,
That tear my soul apart,
Are all that fill
This empty hole
That used to be my heart.
But lately something
Deep inside
Has now begun to form:
A subtle mist
Both mighty and calm
That overwhelms the storm.
A shining light
That pierces
All the shadows that surround
And just when hope
Is almost lost,
I am finally found.
Never have I
Ever had
An angel from above.
I've known true hate,
I've known true pain,
And now I know true love.

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hinatagurl123 on March 26, 2008, 3:01:58 PM

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hinatagurl123very sweet in everyway n yes ur girl is very lucky to have u

angelfox on February 29, 2008, 10:03:44 AM

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angelfoxThat's so beautiful!!!

I WILL USE THIS POEM FOR MY ENTERY TO YOUR CONTEST!! X3

uchihagirl on February 26, 2008, 8:59:53 AM

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uchihagirlso beautiful, she's so friggin lucky XP

YoriXYamiForever on February 26, 2008, 7:34:44 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverMan, Vee is really lucky ^^ I love this one! It's got a little bitterness as well as a sweet message. Great job!

DeathNoteSurvivor on February 26, 2008, 7:35:26 AM

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DeathNoteSurvivorim the lucky one^^ but thanks

YoriXYamiForever on February 26, 2008, 7:37:42 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverTruce then: You're both insanely lucky ^_^ lol And you're welcome

KelekiahGaladrian on February 14, 2008, 9:32:20 PM

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KelekiahGaladrianAw! That's so pretty!!! You did an awesome job, once again! ^^ Luved it!

Blackwolfmoon on February 14, 2008, 5:59:22 AM

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Blackwolfmoonawww ^^ ty J.T! i love it !! <3 

YumeXItachi on February 14, 2008, 5:30:40 AM

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YumeXItachicute :P
good job j.t =]