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Chapter 1 - First Overture

Well I''m starting another story, which follows the tale of a young warlock named Maverick and his sister, Izzy. They set out to defeat a dark witch who has taken over their world.

You''ll have to read to find out more. Please comment.

Chapter 1 - First Overture

Chapter 1 - First Overture
Beauty. Wonder. Kindness. Peace. I've been told that all these things and more could once be found in the land I now call home. But that was a long time ago. Before the pain. Before the hate. Before her. But it is not just my home that has been plagued by that vile witch, Ambrosina, a name that still strikes fear and disgust into the hearts of many. She has used her dark magic to rule over our entire world. But now the time has come for me and my newfound friends to put a stop to her evil. The only question is: Are we strong enough?


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KelekiahGaladrian on May 31, 2010, 1:56:35 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianOoh, that's a beautiful opening. It's very intriguing, hehe. I love it ^^

For some reason, I remember reading this but, obviously, never left you a comment for it. How horrible is that?

Thank heavens I have finally fixed that XP

YoriXYamiForever on October 3, 2009, 10:45:24 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverAck! Need more! lol Actually, that's a good little hook. Very intruiging. :D But seriously, more! :D