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Chapter 1 - My Everlasting Call

Short SasuSaku poem...

Chapter 1 - My Everlasting Call

Chapter 1 - My Everlasting Call
I pushed you away, ignored you completely,
Yet you came back.
I rejected you, swatted you away like an annoying bee,
Yet you came back.
I let my anger take over and insulted you,
Yet you came back.
And when I called you annoying, it was nothing new,
Yet you came back.
But this time, you can’t follow me,
You can’t come back.
There’s something I need to know, before I set you free,
Why did you come back?



Why did I come back?
Well, let me see….
Maybe it was the way you never lost your temper,
Or the way you smirked at me.
Maybe it was your courage, your straightforwardness,
Or how you made me feel.
Maybe it was your coolness in the face of an enemy,
Or how, when you got hurt, you acted like it was no big deal.
But the biggest reason, the one that matters most,
No longer matters, not at all,
Because you’re not here to hear it,
Or to answer my everlasting call.


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Came out kinda crappy....o well

If u can't figure it out, the first verse is Sasuke and the second is Sakura (yay colors!)

NOW COMMENT PPL! XD

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Symphoniaprincess101 on August 2, 2007, 7:14:19 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101very nice poem^^

purplegirlygirl on July 30, 2007, 11:04:41 PM

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purplegirlygirlvery nice - in an awkward way very good though XD

xEmotional on July 14, 2007, 5:12:57 AM

xEmotional on
xEmotionalaw, nice, i liked it .

XxKayxKayxX on March 26, 2007, 12:27:22 PM

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XxKayxKayxXAw i Love your poems and stories!!!!!!!!! I can read them over and over again >.<

Hachi10120 on January 19, 2007, 5:36:18 AM

Hachi10120 on
Hachi10120that..was...deep...I..LOVE IT!!! I love deep and sad poems like this! you sooo rock!!

Yukina-chun on January 1, 2007, 2:08:27 AM

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Yukina-chunThat was so beautiful...
*starts crying*
Yeah...the colors were obvious LOL

Such emotion! This is going on my faves!

sylvermini on October 10, 2006, 5:43:34 PM

sylvermini on
sylverminiaww! cute!

sisaTao on October 10, 2006, 9:10:56 AM

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sisaTaoOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!
REALLY I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
WOW!!!!!!!!
I READ IT OVER AND OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*FAVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*
oO
I LOVE IT!