The Man that Took My Soul.

Chapter 1 - Pure lust
Submitted: May 5, 2007 • Updated: May 5, 2007
Word count: 291 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 244

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Love2talk11 on January 31, 2008, 8:12:26 AM

Love2talk11 on January 31, 2008, 8:12:26 AM (Chapter: 1)

O my frankin bob

Falconlobo on May 5, 2007, 2:08:03 PM

Falconlobo on May 5, 2007, 2:08:03 PM (Chapter: 1)

um i'm not familer with all the characters

it' nice but needs spacing

and i'm not really into yaoi to much

unless it's well writen your story is nice

but you did ask me to read it so i did^^

chiros_girl133 on May 5, 2007, 2:12:27 PM

chiros_girl133 on May 5, 2007, 2:12:27 PM (Chapter: 1)

I nkow but It was rushed so....

Falconlobo on May 5, 2007, 2:18:10 PM

Falconlobo on May 5, 2007, 2:18:10 PM (Chapter: index)

no problem^^

chiros_girl133 on May 5, 2007, 2:13:07 PM

chiros_girl133 on May 5, 2007, 2:13:07 PM (Chapter: index)

*know

Falconlobo on May 5, 2007, 2:17:56 PM

Falconlobo on May 5, 2007, 2:17:56 PM (Chapter: index)

it's okay

and i am a bad speller so i know what you meant^^

chiros_girl133 on May 6, 2007, 12:44:32 AM

chiros_girl133 on May 6, 2007, 12:44:32 AM (Chapter: index)

heh...I got hit with the bad spelling curse from my friend peter

Falconlobo on May 6, 2007, 4:10:48 AM

Falconlobo on May 6, 2007, 4:10:48 AM (Chapter: index)

i always had that problem Peter?

Griffen just kidding^^