Chapter 11 - Almost there.
Submitted January 15, 2007 Updated June 1, 2007 Status Incomplete | Okay. This is my newest Naruto OC story. It's with Kinai Sonai of the Sand. I will only be accepting 5 people's OC's this time and I already have 3 people, wolf-girl-ghost (Milli, Razor, Pheonix), Nara-chan (Nara Namida), and sofyuchiha9 (Sofy).
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Chapter 11 - Almost there.
Chapter 11 - Almost there.
~1 more day. Just one more day of traveling.~
I look at my companions as they leap around up ahead. Nara's fever broke yesterday, so she's walking up ahead with them. I hear Milli scream. I run up to her.
"You okay? Why'd you scream?" I ask.
"I'm fine and," she points up ahead. "that's why I screamed."
I look to where she's pointing and I feel like screaming too.
"We've made it! We've made it to Sand!!!!!!" I yell.
Nara crosses her arms and sighs, while Masoki leaps into the air yelling 'Oh yeah!'
I walk up to the gate and nod to the nin guards. Milli shows her papers and walks through. Nara and Masoki do the same. I look around.
"Now we need to find my old house. I never sold it off, so it should still be there."
They nod, and I bound off to the right.
"This way!" I yell to them.
They follow me. I head into the shop square. I halt in front of my old shop, Nin Supplies.
"We're here!"
"Yay!" Milli and Masoki yell.
"Huzzah." Nara says, but with more enthusiasm than normal.
I lead them in and head upstairs. They follow.
"Masoki. This is your room." I direct him to the first room on the right.
"Milli, this one's your room." I point to the second one on the left.
"And Nara, this one's your room." I show her to the third one on the left.
"Hey Sonai! Where's your room?" Milli asks.
I smile.
"The first one on the left." I answer and head into that room.
I flop down on my old bed and sigh.
~I'm finally home. Finally.... home....~
I fall asleep.
I look at my companions as they leap around up ahead. Nara's fever broke yesterday, so she's walking up ahead with them. I hear Milli scream. I run up to her.
"You okay? Why'd you scream?" I ask.
"I'm fine and," she points up ahead. "that's why I screamed."
I look to where she's pointing and I feel like screaming too.
"We've made it! We've made it to Sand!!!!!!" I yell.
Nara crosses her arms and sighs, while Masoki leaps into the air yelling 'Oh yeah!'
I walk up to the gate and nod to the nin guards. Milli shows her papers and walks through. Nara and Masoki do the same. I look around.
"Now we need to find my old house. I never sold it off, so it should still be there."
They nod, and I bound off to the right.
"This way!" I yell to them.
They follow me. I head into the shop square. I halt in front of my old shop, Nin Supplies.
"We're here!"
"Yay!" Milli and Masoki yell.
"Huzzah." Nara says, but with more enthusiasm than normal.
I lead them in and head upstairs. They follow.
"Masoki. This is your room." I direct him to the first room on the right.
"Milli, this one's your room." I point to the second one on the left.
"And Nara, this one's your room." I show her to the third one on the left.
"Hey Sonai! Where's your room?" Milli asks.
I smile.
"The first one on the left." I answer and head into that room.
I flop down on my old bed and sigh.
~I'm finally home. Finally.... home....~
I fall asleep.
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Kouni46892742 on February 10, 2007, 8:25:50 AM
FINALLY!! HUZZAH!crazicat06 on February 10, 2007, 8:29:45 AM
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lolz, ^.^ Yay!Kouni46892742 on February 14, 2007, 8:34:59 AM
Yesh!!! Nara: I-I'll cook d-dinner!!! I m-make a good st-stir fry!
crazicat06 on February 14, 2007, 8:39:00 AM
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^.^ Yay for stir fry!