Chapter 1 - Mask of Innocence
Submitted September 1, 2004 Updated September 1, 2004 Status Incomplete | a free verse. its copyrighted. this poem is for those who've betrayed you, and expect sheer pity to comfort you....
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Chapter 1 - Mask of Innocence
Chapter 1 - Mask of Innocence
Who..........Who are you supposed to be?
Do you expect to save me? to help me?
You cant, you're a liar.
You wont admit but you realize its true.
I cant be saved by you.....the one who betrayed me most.
I dont even know who you are; you have changed.
You say your sorry but you are lying, I see it in your eyes...
We were such good friends.....I cant accept it,
that you, would betray me.
I dont want your stupid pity....
I want you to leave, I cant wait....
I'm beyond help, and you are beyond cruel..
These lies that have accumulated,
they have to stop hurting me!
I alone will stop my pain.... not your pity.
I hate you and all you have become...
Hide your face, and your deception, behind your Mask of Innocence.
cry_dark_raven T_T
Do you expect to save me? to help me?
You cant, you're a liar.
You wont admit but you realize its true.
I cant be saved by you.....the one who betrayed me most.
I dont even know who you are; you have changed.
You say your sorry but you are lying, I see it in your eyes...
We were such good friends.....I cant accept it,
that you, would betray me.
I dont want your stupid pity....
I want you to leave, I cant wait....
I'm beyond help, and you are beyond cruel..
These lies that have accumulated,
they have to stop hurting me!
I alone will stop my pain.... not your pity.
I hate you and all you have become...
Hide your face, and your deception, behind your Mask of Innocence.
cry_dark_raven T_T
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kaname_yasha5689 on January 16, 2005, 2:40:59 PM
Man Jordy-chan I just recently whent through this,but at least I know not all people are evil,and I have a much better BF because of it.I love the way you write its just great.shadow_kitten on October 15, 2004, 11:22:26 AM
wow jordan if you want to talk i'll listen. well awesome job! it really goes deep!blue_dragon35 on September 12, 2004, 9:50:29 AM
ah,i get now...yea,wat megan said.i hate wen ppl act like that twords me & my pals!-__-cry_dark_raven on September 1, 2004, 9:43:58 AM
grace you dont know who this person is, but they have betrayed us all. they act all their pity out on you its all bull what they talk about....and their is more than one of them. you dont see who they are because they lie to you....blue_dragon35 on September 1, 2004, 9:41:17 AM
omg...jordan,y did you writethis...r u okay?im
there for you jojo,u know that.
talk to me
cry_dark_raven on September 1, 2004, 9:41:02 AM
im sorry if any one has ever suffered this kind of pain....