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Mask of Innocence

a free verse. its copyrighted. this poem is for those who've betrayed you, and expect sheer pity to comfort you....



Chapter 1 - Mask of Innocence
Submitted: September 1, 2004 • Updated: September 1, 2004
Word count: 147 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 164


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kaname_yasha5689 on January 16, 2005, 2:40:59 PM

kaname_yasha5689 on (Chapter: 1)
kaname_yasha5689Man Jordy-chan I just recently whent through this,but at least I know not all people are evil,and I have a much better BF because of it.I love the way you write its just great.

shadow_kitten on October 15, 2004, 11:22:26 AM

shadow_kitten on (Chapter: 1)
shadow_kittenwow jordan if you want to talk i'll listen. well awesome job! it really goes deep!

blue_dragon35 on September 12, 2004, 9:50:29 AM

blue_dragon35 on (Chapter: 1)
blue_dragon35ah,i get now...yea,wat megan said.i hate wen ppl act like that twords me & my pals!-__-

cry_dark_raven on September 1, 2004, 9:43:58 AM

cry_dark_raven on (Chapter: 1)
cry_dark_ravengrace you dont know who this person is, but they have betrayed us all. they act all their pity out on you its all bull what they talk about....and their is more than one of them. you dont see who they are because they lie to you....

blue_dragon35 on September 1, 2004, 9:41:17 AM

blue_dragon35 on (Chapter: 1)
blue_dragon35omg...jordan,y did you write
this...r u okay?im
there for you jojo,u know that.
talk to me

cry_dark_raven on September 1, 2004, 9:41:02 AM

cry_dark_raven on (Chapter: 1)
cry_dark_ravenim sorry if any one has ever suffered this kind of pain....