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th plan that backfired.

This is a love story! when Blitz Meets Haze! But the problem is Blitz is good and Haze is Bad. And Haze has a job to do.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The Call
Submitted: January 29, 2006 • Updated: January 29, 2006
Word count: 116 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 156

Chapter 2 - she'll be fine
Submitted: February 3, 2006 • Updated: February 3, 2006
Word count: 197 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 134

Chapter 3 - question
Submitted: February 14, 2006 • Updated: February 14, 2006
Word count: 415 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 152

Chapter 4 - getting inside
Submitted: April 23, 2006 • Updated: April 23, 2006
Word count: 156 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 167

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Ultimate_Lifeform on April 24, 2006, 10:33:35 AM

Ultimate_Lifeform on (Chapter: 4)
Ultimate_LifeformAAH! A cliffhangar! Good chapter!

Mattkur on April 24, 2006, 9:27:49 AM

Mattkur on (Chapter: 4)
MattkurFinally! The computer let this window get up... anyway, great chapter!

Link_the_hedgehog_magician on April 23, 2006, 6:56:54 AM

Link_the_hedgehog_magician on (Chapter: 4)
Link_the_hedgehog_magicianAwesome!!

Ultimate_Lifeform on February 26, 2006, 7:15:57 AM

Ultimate_Lifeform on (Chapter: 3)
Ultimate_Lifeformcool!

Link_the_hedgehog_magician on February 14, 2006, 12:13:20 PM

Link_the_hedgehog_magician on (Chapter: 3)
Link_the_hedgehog_magicianAwesome! It just makes me want to SHOUT!!!!!!

darkness42 on February 3, 2006, 8:01:33 PM

darkness42 on (Chapter: 2)
darkness42ok i'll have to try..........it's hard............

Link_the_hedgehog_magician on February 3, 2006, 1:49:57 PM

Link_the_hedgehog_magician on (Chapter: 2)
Link_the_hedgehog_magicianI am sorry I couldn't be read this sooner, but my cousin was hogging up the computer, Any way great story, hope to see more chapters.

Ultimate_Lifeform on February 3, 2006, 11:02:17 AM

Ultimate_Lifeform on (Chapter: 2)
Ultimate_Lifeformcool chapter! can't wait for more! and to write fight scenes just put like

Blitz:*jumps up, does a backflip, and kicks the gangster on the head*

Gangster:*fell to the ground but recovered and took out a knife*

Blitz:*tries to kick the gangster again but he slices her shoe*

something like that. just make up a cool tv show fight. sorry if this sounds disrespectful, your stories rock anyway!

darkness42 on February 3, 2006, 10:52:43 AM

darkness42 on (Chapter: 2)
darkness42sorry if somethings are misspelled my spell checker's broke again.