I Have Learned...

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December 14, 2007
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This is just a poem about what I have learned from life thus far. Life is full of hurt, but you cannot let it hinder you.

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Chapter 1 - I Have Learned...
Submitted: December 14, 2007 • Updated: December 14, 2007
Word count: 195 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 93

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hayaikitsune on December 17, 2007, 3:39:15 AM

hayaikitsune on December 17, 2007, 3:39:15 AM (Chapter: 1)

Well writing poem, but there's one conflict. You say you're what God made you and yet you cuss which is a sin.

"Let no corrupt communication proceed out of your mouth, but that which is good to the use of edifying, that it may minister grace unto the hearers.
-Ephesians 4:29

"Set a watch, O LORD, before my mouth; keep the door of my lips.
Incline not my heart to any evil thing, to practise wicked works with men that work iniquity: and let me not eat of their dainties."
-Psalms 141:3-4

Here is some proof. Other than that, it's a good poem.