Lovers of the Woods
Submitted January 8, 2012 Updated October 17, 2012 Status Incomplete | Warning! This has sexual content in it. I have to put it here or it won't let me post my story with the preview block thing. And be mature about this, please. I don't want immature comments on my page or story. Thank you!
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - The First Time
Submitted: January 8, 2012 • Updated: April 8, 2012
Word count: 2492 • Size: 12k • Comments: 6 • views: 211
Chapter 2 - The Beginning
Submitted: April 14, 2012 • Updated: July 6, 2012
Word count: 1853 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 189
Chapter 3 - The Promise
Submitted: October 15, 2012 • Updated: October 17, 2012
Word count: 1584 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 235
Chapter 4 - The Vow
Submitted: January 12, 2013 • Updated: January 12, 2013
Word count: 1494 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 128
Chapter 5 - The Honeymoon *Dyaln's Perspective*
Submitted: March 2, 2013 • Updated: December 15, 2013
Word count: 2635 • Size: 12k • Comments: 0 • views: 105
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luckylace222 on December 11, 2013, 4:11:11 PM
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I. LOVED. THE WAY. THEY MET. Oh my god. how cute and strong and nice of Katie! ;~; You gotta run towards people and find your soulmate in the woods- hahah! luckylace222 on December 11, 2013, 4:09:42 PM
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The happiness....oh the happinesss.....oh how it overwhelms me! NOW WHEN DOES ONE OF THEM MESS UP AND THEN THEY FIGHT AND THEY KISS UP MAKE UP AND THEN HAVE HOT ANGRY SEXluckylace222 on January 15, 2013, 7:02:44 AM
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GUUHHH THEY ARE SO HAPPY TOGETHER THAT THERE IS NO WAY THIS WILL HAVE A HAPPY ENDING.The stinkies/saddest part that I read is THAT SHE DID NOT MAKE IT TO DISNEY WORLD. BALLS!!!
Keep up the great work!
fireangel72 on February 25, 2013, 3:36:02 PM
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OMG LUCKY YOU CAN'T JUST FORESHADOW LIKE THAT.;)
Thanks! Did you like this way of writing better than when there wasn't a certain point of view?
luckylace222 on February 26, 2013, 7:24:51 PM
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I remember it being a little easier to follow, so maybe this writing style will work! fireangel72 on February 26, 2013, 8:22:48 PM
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Thanks! I'll keep this in mind. Your feedback is so very helpful. Thank you so much!luckylace222 on October 19, 2012, 5:03:00 AM
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LOL, Nice! It is like....
THEY ARE NEVER GOING TO BREAK UP. EVER.fireangel72 on October 19, 2012, 12:31:32 PM
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Hehehe :) I'm planning on making this a lot more chapters if I can keep my concentration set on it.luckylace222 on July 7, 2012, 4:33:58 AM
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"What could go wrong?" EVEYRYONE knows stereotypically in movies, books, any other form of literature (even comics), something wrong will COME RIGHT AFTER THAT. NOOOOOOOOO Their love is too deep (and almost porn-ish, I just read semi-lovely porn! XD) to get messed up now! Is an in-and-out burglar going to come?! AUGHH!!luckylace222 on April 8, 2012, 12:07:03 PM
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God god, so this is what a sex scene between a girl and guy is like in writing! O; I feel dirty reading it, but I know it was not that type of dirty! It was quite heart-felt and warm! Nice work noting their expressions and dialogue! The only criticism I can say for the first chapter is that there is repetitive "You're are so beautiful" dialogue and the constant emphasis that they are smiling. Other than that, the movement details and romantic idea in the woods (I hope they do not scratch themselves on poison ivy) was an interesting, fun read! Keep up the romance writing always!fireangel72 on April 9, 2012, 7:12:09 AM
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Thank you very very much. :)Rangiku on February 21, 2012, 12:37:14 PM
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awwww i wish i could write that stuff TT romanticle TT............WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!fireangel72 on March 7, 2012, 5:30:58 AM
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I will! :D In fact, I am about to try to finish it now. (no promises though :P )Rangiku on March 9, 2012, 6:32:14 AM
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LOL! GOOD LUCK!fireangel72 on April 3, 2012, 8:30:24 AM
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Thank you so much :)luckylace222 on January 9, 2012, 11:36:42 PM
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NOW THAT WAS SWEET. REALLYYYY sweet. Do normal couples still do that?! NAHHH they are not romantic enough for that. I thought it was going to be a generic romance reading, but no! That guessing shape with te tongue game is hilarious and cute! I love the ending. "No re dos babe." *__* WHAT DID IT SAY?! I DO NOT KNOW!TELL MEEEEEEEEEE
Yeah! It is good so far! Not too long, and not too short!
fireangel72 on January 16, 2012, 4:56:44 AM
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Haha Thank you very much And more will be coming very soon :)