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Chapter 1 - Pirates Deep Down Inside

just another poem *^_^*

Chapter 1 - Pirates Deep Down Inside

Chapter 1 - Pirates Deep Down Inside


Pirates Deep Down Inside



We're all pirates deep down inside,

Looking for treasure

Allowing us to be consumed with pride.

We're tough and mean

Always trying to get what we do not need.

We're looking for a special treasure,

That no one can find,

Unless they have a special map,

To show them the divine.

As we go through life sailing seas

And tough waves,

We need to be brave and follow

God's ways.

If we find the treasure,

We'll be rich for ever

With joy to keep us sailing away,

To keep on seeking treasure,

With his hand showing us the way.



As we dress as pirates today,

Let us all know to pray,

That God will show us our special treasure,

Because we are all

Pirates deep down inside.

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BunnyBunnyBunny on July 25, 2006, 3:49:27 PM

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BunnyBunnyBunnyWow, that was an awsome poem. Great job!

gabbyg04 on July 7, 2005, 3:51:22 PM

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gabbyg04aawwwwww!!!...thx 4 the comments guyz! your support is great...i need it..so i can like write more...thx mr me..ur an awesome friend miss u 2...keep on bein' special K (u know who u r)
~GABBY~

Mister_Me on June 18, 2005, 1:41:00 PM

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Mister_Mehey i like it... do more... your bf (best friend)

Mister_Me on June 18, 2005, 1:40:59 PM

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Mister_Mehey i like it... do more... your bf (best friend)

Mister_Me on June 18, 2005, 1:40:47 PM

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Mister_Mehey i like it... do more... your bf (best friend)

gabbyg04 on April 21, 2005, 11:19:39 AM

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gabbyg04hhhhhheeeeeeyyyyyyy artist`350....nice work on the inuyasha and kagome kiss pic...its sooo kyute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

artist1350 on April 17, 2005, 10:45:56 PM

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artist1350*sniffle sniffle* that was sooooo beautiful

PyroDragon on February 19, 2005, 1:30:51 AM

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PyroDragonNice poem I liked the god part cuz I belive in god too.AWESOME POEM. By pyroDrago


U know we have talked before just not for long

AIM=mxgdman

greenpirate on December 30, 2004, 2:45:43 AM

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greenpiratejust wondering how you got your poem on here. My story didn't show up. It's the one listed under your poem called, The Bleeding Skull of black and white. My text isn't showing. So if yah can help me out. thanks. Loved your poem!

gabbyg04 on December 4, 2004, 10:10:57 AM

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gabbyg04oh ya..pplz...the whole thing about being dressed as pirates thing waz b/cuz i went to a pirate themed halloween party..and my poem waz umm..."said" in front of pplz...anywayz...lemmmee know if u like it..~GABBY~