Chapter 1 - behind these eyes
Submitted September 19, 2005 Updated September 19, 2005 Status Incomplete | i came here for one reason to do invader zim fanart but now i realize that my work will never be good enough my stories on fanfiction will never be good enough nothing i do will ever be good enough so i wrote this little poem dedicated to my broken h
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Chapter 1 - behind these eyes
Chapter 1 - behind these eyes
`Behind these eyes'
Behind these eyes are tears,
Tears of unspoken fears,
I want to let out the pain,
Just like the falling rain,
But I can't because I have no soul,
My soul was lost long ago,
So as I sit here in the dark and cry,
Be honest and tell me,
Can you see behind these eyes.
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Whatsername on December 17, 2005, 10:00:07 PM
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woh, great! post up another! post up another! *favs*zamnza on October 8, 2005, 8:33:27 AM
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Wow...This has the same topic of a poem I wrote over here in Cali! I applaud on how you wrote this dude!invader-monkey on September 28, 2005, 11:10:56 AM
thanks Andy_and_Nicky for reviewing! ^_^ it means alot to me i might even have another poem posted on the view of the world! Andy_and_Nicky on September 24, 2005, 10:56:06 PM
I added this to my favorites it sooo good!! i think people can relate to ur poem in a number of wayz, if they're lonely, if they have done sumthing wrong, or if they have a secret that feels like if u let people know u'll be castaway(im deep aren't i?)YAY!! anywayz gr8t poem, all i have to do now is try ta be happy after reading it-_-