Precious ember tears

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Submitted
January 23, 2007
Updated
July 23, 2007
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 3k
Words: 687
Comments: 3
Views: 997
Faves...: 2
Rating: 1

She watched the reflections ripple gently across the water. Her tears fell for a darkend soul filld with hate and sadness.

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Category: Cartoons » Avatar: The Last Airbender

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Chapter 1 - watery reflections
Submitted: January 23, 2007 • Updated: July 23, 2007
Word count: 687 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 273

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thehighlord on February 1, 2007, 6:25:57 AM

thehighlord on February 1, 2007, 6:25:57 AM (Chapter: 1)

This is very good, I like it a lot; I think you captured kataraâs emotions very well.
If you add anything to this let me know please as I would love to read it

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keysdanie on January 28, 2007, 1:14:07 AM

keysdanie on January 28, 2007, 1:14:07 AM (Chapter: index)

thanks

waterbender00 on January 26, 2007, 7:49:27 PM

waterbender00 on January 26, 2007, 7:49:27 PM (Chapter: 1)

Whoa, that is realy deep. you realy captured their emotions.Â I luv it.