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Precious ember tears

She watched the reflections ripple gently across the water. Her tears fell for a darkend soul filld with hate and sadness.



Chapter 1 - watery reflections
Submitted: January 23, 2007 • Updated: July 23, 2007
Word count: 687 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 251


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thehighlord on February 1, 2007, 6:25:57 AM

thehighlord on (Chapter: 1)
thehighlordThis is very good, I like it a lot; I think you captured katara’s emotions very well.
If you add anything to this let me know please as I would love to read it

Oshnsoa Shnedashn kiungepgli

keysdanie on January 28, 2007, 1:14:07 AM

keysdanie on (Chapter: index)

waterbender00 on January 26, 2007, 7:49:27 PM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: 1)
waterbender00Whoa, that is realy deep. you realy captured their emotions. I luv it.