"As It Approaches"
Submitted September 11, 2004 Updated September 11, 2004 Status Incomplete | hopelessness and a feeling of lost that's destroying a person
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Chapter 1 - "As It Approaches"
Submitted: September 11, 2004 • Updated: September 11, 2004
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sofiadivine on September 21, 2005, 2:46:14 PM
sofiadivine on (Chapter: 1)
wow, surely sounds like the topic of the poem has been through a lot... but people try to relate and yet can't. they say it all but they really don't feel it all... i just hope that nobody ever gets that close to death for in the end you always make a difference to at least one person. sometimes you just don't see it until it's too late. I know death may sound appealing at times but when you actually get too close to death you'll lose in the end.