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Why Can't I Sleep?

A TwilightXLightning oneshot. I've been trying to write one of these for a while, so i slept on it. When i woke up, i was like, OMG THATS IT!
 
So......... enjoy! ^^

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Chapter 1 - Why Can't I Sleep?
Submitted: May 31, 2008 • Updated: May 31, 2008
Word count: 531 • Size: 2k • Comments: 10 • views: 257

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WhiteLighting681 on August 29, 2008, 11:19:33 AM

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WhiteLighting681Omgee..... I forgot that you could write. xP xP Definately catching up on the rest of your stories... This one was adorable. <333

mechadragon13 on August 29, 2008, 11:31:04 AM

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mechadragon13omg thats what everyone sayyyyyyys!!! XD i loved it too XD

Snowpaw1 on August 17, 2008, 1:44:50 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: continued from the last comment with Ocarina and Lightning and Twilly.

Me: Well no need to fear, cause shes not upset anymore. Shes finally a couple with Thunder!

Ocarina: (walks up) Hi Lightning, can we have a truce Twilly? After all I already have a bf, Thunder! It just happened the day this comment got posted. Hey, for a truce, lets go to the best place in the world. ICE CREAM SHOP!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 7:15:59 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning+Twilight: *jump up in the air happily* SWEET!!!!

Me: *grabs ocarina and runs to the ice cream shop*

Snowpaw1 on August 18, 2008, 1:42:00 AM

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Snowpaw1Ocarina: AHHHHHHH! Mish slo- hey we're there. YAY!!!!!! (runs in fast and sits down with an oreo milkshake)

mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 2:33:16 AM

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mechadragon13Me: sweetness. *runs to the register and gets a strawberry shake* yum. *sluuuurp*

Lightning: *runs in and gets a brownie sundae* i feel like lots of chocolate oday XD *sits at the table*
Twilight: *gets a twisty cone* yumm. *sits*

Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 1:04:34 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: (comes in with werehog Sonic) Mine... If anyone touches him you will regret it.

Ocarina: (when im not looking pokes Sonic) ^^

Me: HEY!!!!! U TOUCHED HIM!!!! (goes werehog and chases Ocarina hurling dark balls at him)

Ocarina: AIEEEEE!!!!!!

Sonic: (anime sweat drop and byes a drumstick cone raveanously eats it)

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 3:33:45 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: umm... you do know you brought a ravenous carnivore into a public establishment right?
Lightning: .......da?

Me: XD

Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 4:46:21 AM

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Snowpaw1Lol

Me: U TOUCHED HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ocarina: AIEEEEEEEE!!!!! HELP MEH!!!!! SAVE MY POOR HIDE!!!!!!

Sonic: I should leave... (goes out of ice cream shop only to be found dragged in again by me)(sigh)

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 4:48:01 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight+Lightning+me: -_-;;;;;;

Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 4:52:31 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: U stay here! (chases Ocarina)

Sonic: (leaves and is dragged in again)

Me: stay!!!

Sonic: (leaves and is dragged in again)

2 hours later...

Me: Stay right here. (chases Ocarina)

Sonic: (leaves and is dragged in again) HELP ME!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 4:55:41 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: snow... let him go.....

Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 4:58:32 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: BUT HES SO HAWT!!!!!!!!!!!

Sonic: (bites me and runs off) IM FREEE!!!!!!!!!!!

Me: OWOWOWOW!!!! Hes still hawt!!!! (drags him in again) MUHAHAHA

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 5:46:54 AM

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mechadragon13.......................

Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 6:22:21 AM

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Snowpaw1Sonic: (bitesme so hard that he can escape) FINALLY!!!!

Me: OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 7:55:36 AM

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mechadragon13everyone: RUN SONIC, RUN!!!

Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 8:07:26 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: Fine he can go... (buys a smoothie and slurps) mmmmmmmmm

Ocarina: who wants to go exploring?

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 8:14:11 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight+Lightning+Me: ehhhh........

Lightning: we've had quite a bit of exploring not too long ago...

Me: and i'm dealing with an argument on my profile right now so dont expect long replies....... DONT GET INTO IT!

Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 8:16:11 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: I saw it... its between Critic and Sonicxrougeluver

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 8:18:27 AM

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mechadragon13sonicxrougeluva is fighting a losing battle. she knows she stole that idea and she just keep denying it.

Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 8:20:34 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: Im on Crictics side. man blocking a person is just wrong... especially all because of an arguement!

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 8:21:39 AM

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mechadragon13thanks. i already have a few people agreeing with me. it's 4 vs 2 right now. and i told you not to get into this!!!

Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 8:22:55 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: Oh oopsie!

Ocarina: Im gonna go off for a little hike if anyone wants to join me

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 8:29:30 AM

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mechadragon135 vs 3 now. with us being the five.

Twilight: i think we'll stay....

Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 8:30:23 AM

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Snowpaw1Ocarina: Ok! (leaves ice cream shop)

Me: Lets talk about sumthing else ok?

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 8:32:48 AM

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mechadragon13not much else to talk about......

Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 8:39:12 AM

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Snowpaw1True... LETS BE RANDOM!!!!!!!! BAA BAA BLACK SHEEP HAVE YOU ANY WOOL...

mechadragon13 on August 21, 2008, 5:43:29 AM

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mechadragon13YES SIR, YES SIR, THREE BAGS FULL!!

Snowpaw1 on August 21, 2008, 6:10:35 AM

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Snowpaw1ONE FOR MY MASTER AND ONE FOR MY DAME AND ONE FOR THE LITTLE ONE THAT LIVES DOWN THE LANE...

mechadragon13 on August 21, 2008, 6:20:41 AM

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mechadragon13*STILL TO THE TUNE OF THE SONG* AND I DONT KNOW THE REST OF THE SONG.....

Snowpaw1 on August 21, 2008, 6:22:44 AM

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Snowpaw1ROFL!!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!!! (laughs) F-funny!

mechadragon13 on August 21, 2008, 6:34:00 AM

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mechadragon13Me: what? it's true!!! thats as much as i know XD

Snowpaw1 on August 21, 2008, 7:22:23 AM

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Snowpaw1Ya... ANd then after Little boy lives down the lane its BAA BAA BLACK SHEEP HAVE YOU ANY WOOL? YES SIR YES SIR THREE BAGS F-UUUULLLLLL

mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 4:57:57 AM

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mechadragon13ah. ok. XD

Snowpaw1 on August 24, 2008, 6:47:42 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: (laughs) Ok... now what? I know!!! (starts singing "Grease Lightning" Off tune) GREASE LIGHTNING GO GREASE LIGHTNING!

Zukoinferno on July 20, 2008, 4:40:09 AM

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Zukoinfernoangie: KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!! YOU 2 WERE DRIVING ME NUTS!!!!!!!!

me: wow. thats all i can say. this is REALLY good.

zuko: even though you cant write anything worth shoot... ^^

me: STFU!!!

mechadragon13 on July 20, 2008, 9:22:15 AM

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mechadragon13Me: this has been up for a while now, actually ^-^

Lightning+Twilight: ^///////////^

Zukoinferno on July 28, 2008, 3:41:46 AM

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Zukoinfernoits good either way! ^^

Tinner1214 on June 4, 2008, 12:57:57 PM

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Tinner1214umm.

umm.

umm.

*2 hours later*

eh... From what you were saying about it in class, I was expecting better. This feels a lot like the BOOK Twilight, which I didn't like. So call me picky, but this is a minus for me.

Still romantical, though ^^

dingocat on July 8, 2008, 8:38:33 AM

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mechadragon13 on July 8, 2008, 9:04:25 AM

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mechadragon13chill...... its ok hes like that all the time XD

mechadragon13 on June 5, 2008, 2:25:41 AM

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mechadragon13thats what i wanted to hear ^^ haha XD well, you didnt read Twilight so you wouldn't know XD thankies anyways tinner ^^

Tinner1214 on June 5, 2008, 2:56:20 AM

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Tinner1214I in fact read half of twilight, then got a partial refund at the bookstore.

So there.

mechadragon13 on June 5, 2008, 9:30:31 AM

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mechadragon13... boo.

Snowpaw1 on July 31, 2008, 10:08:13 AM

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Snowpaw1is it the one about hte girl and the vampire dude??? everyone is talking about the new book..

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2008, 11:44:12 PM

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mechadragon13OMG YES!!!! breaking dawn comes out soon!!! and midnight sun a little after!!! ^^

Snowpaw1 on August 21, 2008, 5:32:47 AM

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Snowpaw1IM ON NEW MOON!!!!!

Snowpaw1 on July 2, 2008, 9:36:02 AM

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Snowpaw1Awesome that'll you do something, but Ocarina in that pict doesn't look as nearly as awesome as she does now. I'll post a picture of her as soon as possible

mechadragon13 on July 3, 2008, 8:53:59 AM

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mechadragon13ok then, i'll wait ^^

Snowpaw1 on July 5, 2008, 1:57:48 AM

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Snowpaw1you'll see a pic on the 7th so please try to be patient.

Anyways i love the story, its so cute! Why did Lightning's quills glow in the dark? Sorry i wonder why

mechadragon13 on July 5, 2008, 9:47:17 AM

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mechadragon13they do that either when he gets really charged up with electricity, or when he feels a strong emotion. you know, anger, rage, and in this case, love. but they dont do it all the time and you really can't notice it during the day ^^

Snowpaw1 on July 6, 2008, 10:46:30 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: cool!

Ocarina: *feels burnt with jealousy*

Me: *laughs and just rubs her back until can't takeit anymore and falls to the ground laughing* HAHAHAHa..good...HAHA..story!! *hiccups*

mechadragon13 on July 7, 2008, 7:22:49 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: uhh... oca?

Me: whats so funny????

Snowpaw1 on July 26, 2008, 11:38:50 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: how she feels... its hilarous!!!!! Hic...HAHA!!!

Ocarina: (shakes Lightnings hand off and walks away sadly) Leave me alone...

Me: Wow... shes usually social... O.O

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2008, 11:01:52 AM

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mechadragon13Me: you're right......

Lightning: *knows why* ..........

Snowpaw1 on July 29, 2008, 9:34:51 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: Its akward....

Ocarina: (sits down).......

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2008, 10:31:45 AM

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mechadragon13Me: i would think....

Lightning: ehh... *rubs the back of his head absently*

Me: wow this is REALLY awkward XD

Snowpaw1 on July 29, 2008, 11:59:26 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: Yup... Lightning, u ok??? I know how ya feel.

mechadragon13 on July 30, 2008, 11:04:18 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *absently* huh?

Me: *pokes him* pay attention, zap-brain!

Lightning: no i heard her..... you do?

Snowpaw1 on July 31, 2008, 8:38:44 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: ya.

Ocarins: (still sitting looking out out space) .........

Me: Wow.. that story made her like really dislike Lightning...

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2008, 11:43:35 PM

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mechadragon13Lightning: ehh...... *mind is working overtime* i gotta think about this....

Me: hey blame me, i wrote the story!!! dont take your anger out at lightning....... i loves him! *huggles* he's my favorite oc, and i dont want anyone hating him.

Snowpaw1 on August 1, 2008, 10:15:21 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: ITS NOT ME!!! Its Ocarina!!! Ok maybe it is me cuz I kind of "control" her... (hugs Lightning) BUT! I can't imagine ANYONE hating him.

mechadragon13 on August 5, 2008, 1:53:55 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: gee i feel loved...........

Me: i know that... that was directed at ocarina..... any way we can help?

Snowpaw1 on August 6, 2008, 11:58:14 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: BTW. I FINISHED TWILIGHT 2DAY!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS AWESOME!!!! And about Ocarina... she'd like it if she and Lightning were a cuuple XP shes akward...

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 3:03:10 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: ......... i can't.................

Me: he already broke someone's heart and hated it. he won't do it again........

Snowpaw1 on August 9, 2008, 12:22:00 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: I understand, Twilight would probably go Daemon and kill Lightning and Ocarina.. (shuddering) gosh bTW what happened with you and Terra Lightning?

Ocarina: *WHY ME!!!*

mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 5:21:21 AM

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mechadragon13Me: naw, twilight isnt THAT violent. she wouldnt kill anyone. but she MIGHT go on a rampage......

Lightning: *shakes head* i dont wanna talk about it.....

Snowpaw1 on August 9, 2008, 6:18:27 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: Ok Lightning. (hugging him) thats fine. Eventually Ocarina will realize that you want Twilly and not her, and she'll just hang out with Thunder

mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 6:54:19 AM

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mechadragon13Me: thunder seems like a nice guy. and he'll probably give ocarina more attantion than lightning.... he's just too busy! what with running hybrid nation and all that stuff........

Lightning: *is reminincing, and isnt happy about it*

Snowpaw1 on August 10, 2008, 12:11:22 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: Ocarina just really enjoys Lightning and having a cheerful guy, but Thunder can be a little TOO over protective and is too much like amy every now and then

mechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 7:39:22 AM

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mechadragon13Me: thats just it. if she tells thunder what she wants from him, he might like her enough to obey! Lightning's relationship with Twilight is already problematic, and putting ocarina into the equation is not gonna help. it's just... a little hard right now.....

Snowpaw1 on August 11, 2008, 6:15:44 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: Twilight+Lightning+Ocarina=trouble... lol.. anyways now that i've read Twilight, Lightning does seem like a Jacob

mechadragon13 on August 11, 2008, 9:02:29 AM

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mechadragon13Me: ^^

Lightning: ....da?

Snowpaw1 on August 12, 2008, 2:52:29 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: Huh??? Gosh Ocarina is upset...

mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 3:06:46 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: well, what can we do? she's the only one who can change her own mind........

Me: he's right you know. oh, can you start a new comment?

Snowpaw1 on August 17, 2008, 1:41:18 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: ur right, Ok ill start a new one

Snowpaw1 on June 30, 2008, 1:12:21 PM

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Snowpaw1cute! I had finished a pic of Lightning and Ocarina meeting and i didn't save it !!!!!! (Grr...)

mechadragon13 on July 1, 2008, 3:59:28 AM

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mechadragon13'doh. i'm sure it would have looked awesome. i think i'll draw something lika that too ^^

poppixie101 on June 3, 2008, 1:52:05 PM

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poppixie101this story is magnificant
its tooo cuuuute!!!

mechadragon13 on June 4, 2008, 2:40:12 AM

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mechadragon13^^ thanks ^^

poppixie101 on June 2, 2008, 10:10:52 AM

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poppixie101cuuuuuute!!!
adorable
romantic
spectaxular!!!

mechadragon13 on June 2, 2008, 11:39:55 AM

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mechadragon13thanks!! i got that from a LOT of my friends at school.... the other ones just squealed in glee XD