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Just a poem I wrote. AeroArtist told me to post it, so here ya go!



Chapter 1 - its justa poem...
Submitted: September 9, 2005 • Updated: September 9, 2005
Word count: 67 • Size: <1k • Comments: 10 • views: 177


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StephAlanPoe on April 29, 2006, 4:05:18 AM

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I am in love with this poem.
It's so deep.

Amazing, keep it up!

FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on February 23, 2006, 8:22:47 AM

FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on (Chapter: 1)
FrenchSpeakingLightBulbzThis is amazing. It's talented, artistic, deep and extremely inspirational, I might add. I love the feeling it gives and the whole concept. Favorites.

pebbles_athina_bob on November 16, 2005, 1:48:31 AM

pebbles_athina_bob on (Chapter: 1)
pebbles_athina_bobwow that is sum pretty heavy sh** but its awesome!!

Como on November 11, 2005, 11:20:03 PM

Como on (Chapter: 1)
ComoWOAH! THAT WAS AWSOME! pweez read my poem?

mangacheese1818 on November 1, 2005, 7:50:16 AM

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mangacheese1818Wow. *faints* Simply amazing. *faves a bazillion times* Can you help me out with my own pitiful excuses for poems?

Fluffybunny on October 12, 2005, 1:15:38 AM

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FluffybunnyWow! thats a great poem! good work!

Crystalvixon on October 11, 2005, 11:40:06 PM

Crystalvixon on (Chapter: 1)
CrystalvixonThis is beautifully structured. It flows really well. Where did you get the inspiration for it? Don't know what the poem is about but I can relate to it.

Thankyou for the comment ;)

DynaChrissy on September 24, 2005, 8:47:16 AM

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DynaChrissyThat was really good! Nice poem!

Anime_Crazy_K-chan on September 10, 2005, 6:36:58 AM

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Anime_Crazy_K-chanThat's REALLY good! By golly you have TALENT!

AeroArtist on September 9, 2005, 10:21:31 AM

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AeroArtistholy shoot! and you think that's not good?! man... you're your own worst critic, that's for sure. lol. that is excellent! very glad you posted it.