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Chapter 23 - Jirayai's Manuscript(WIP)

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Chapter 23 - Jirayai's Manuscript(WIP)

Chapter 23 - Jirayai's Manuscript(WIP)
Makeout Hopeful (Volume 1)
By Jiraiya

“I can’t believe I’m doing this…” Ekyt muttered, blushing terribly.

“C’mon, lighten up! You’re paying me good money for me to write out these little scenarios for you, so you might as well enjoy them! Now, here’s what I’ve got. Let me know what you think.”

Jiraiya handed over this manuscripts, and Ekyt took them. He had a bad feeling about this…

--

Ekyt was in the middle of his workout. Shirtless, sweat glistened off his body. His body was muscular for his slim build. He was slightly tanned from exercising like this. His movements were crisp and clear, and looked powerful enough to vanquish any enemy.

Sakura watched silently from her spot, feeling guilty for spying on him. But she couldn’t help herself. She wanted to do more than just watch, though. She wanted to train with him. He was one of the village elite, and got that way by working hard.

But Sakura had a hard time getting past his shirtless body. Especially when he moved so gracefully, she couldn’t help but feel a quiet sexiness about him. He didn’t go out of his way to project it, and he was downright shy. But that made him all the more desirable.

The affection-starved kunoichi licked her lips, watching the sweat drip off his body as he punched an imaginary foe. He held his pose just for second, to make sure of his aim. In that second, though, he made Sakura decide what to do.

-

Ekyt heard the sound of someone approaching. He turned to face them, reaching for a towel to wipe the sweat off his face.

“H-hi, Ekyt,” a red-faced Sakura greeted him.

“Oh! Hi, S-Sakura!” Ekyt exclaimed, suddenly feeling naked. He was like that. Even though it was perfectly fine for a guy to be shirtless, he always felt naked when he was. Especially in front of girls, and twice as much in front of Sakura.

“I, uh, came to, uh, train with you!” Sakura managed to squeak out, being shy and not at all like her usual self. “I hope you’ll allow me to join you!”

Ekyt blushed- no point in trying to clothe himself now. “Sure. Uh, what kind of training?”

“Whatever kind you do!” Sakura told him. “I’m determined to become stronger for the man I love!”

For Sasuke… Ekyt thought sadly. He didn’t know the Uchiha boy very well, but he definitely wasn’t a fan of his being so popular with the girl he had his eyes on. Not that he could blame Sasuke for that. Heck, Sasuke had done everything he could to lose Sakura’s affections.

As this was running through Ekyt’s mind, Sakura was making her next move.

“So, we train like this?”

Ekyt turned around, and immediately turned red. No, beyond red. Several shades of red.

Sakura had pulled off her top, leaving her bare-chested. She was just staring at him innocently; almost curiously. He was sputtering for an answer, but couldn’t seem to come up with one. He had never been in this situation before.

Sakura was sweating, and blushing with embarrassment. She had never gone so far with Sasuke. But now that she was older, she felt it was alright- after all, she loved this boy. He would just have to realize her feelings. Although Sakura suspected that he had feelings for her.

“I, uh…” Ekyt stammered, not sure what to do or say. “Uh, if you’re, uh, comfortable…”

“I…am. Let’s begin,” Sakura told him, shuffling around and stretching to warm up. Ekyt didn’t know whether to stare or look away. He knew what he wanted to do.

“Well, uh, we do this first. Er, I do, usually. It’s called a ‘kata’, and it’s an imaginary fight. Most of the moves are kinda worthless in a real fight, but it builds stamina and good reflexes.”

They did katas for a half hour. Then came the harder part.

“There’s also sparring, grappling, and weapons. Do any interest you in particular?”

Sakura took a look at Ekyt. She knew just what she wanted. “Grappling!”

Ekyt couldn’t believe it. This wasn’t a real situation. It couldn’t be! A topless girl he had a crush on wanted to do grappling exercises with him? It was such an awesome idea! But completely unrealistic. There was no way this was happening.

Then Ekyt felt it- her hands on his bare shoulders and arms. She jockeyed for position, getting in tight to him. With a quick shoulder feint, she swept his legs, sending him down to the ground.

“Sorry, I slipped! Between the sweat on my hands and the sweat on your body, I kinda messed up,” Sakura told him apologetically. She knelt down to help him up, easily hefting the light boy to his feet. He couldn’t help but be in awe of her again. Her cheeks twinged with pink, and her body becoming slick with sweat, it was a major-league turn-on.

He would be more turned on a split-second later when Sakura hugged him.

“Ah, sorry, I’m getting you all sweaty! But I know how to fix that!”

Using her strength, Sakura dragged Ekyt toward a waterfall. She looked at him expectantly. He looked back at her, knowing there was no way he could be right about where she was going with this.

“Oh, okay!” Sakura sighed mockingly, stripping the rest of her clothes off. “I guess the big boy needed a little help. Now, c’mon! You’re gonna get your pants wet if you bathe like that!”

Ekyt actually reached for his pants before he started to wonder what the hell he was doing.

But I wanna! his mind said, while his body was in complete agreement. But was this really okay? I mean, a boy and girl naked together? That shouldn’t be happening, right? Sure, they were friends, but that was all!

I want to be more than friends, and she’s practically telling me ‘it’s okay, let’s get closer!’ I’m an idiot if I pass this up…

Ekyt pulled his clothes off and joined her. For a while, they stood in silence. It seemed akward for Ekyt, but Sakura felt right at home. They kept a slight distance for a short time. Then Sakura turned toward him.

“I can’t believe I had to do this much to get you to notice how much I liked you!” she finally exclaimed.

GLOMP!

Sakura had moved closer to Ryouko, reaching around him from behind.

“I’ve been wanting to scrub your body. I’ve been wanting to do more than that, to be honest. I want to…I want to make you a man.”

Sakura’s eyes grew wide, and she blushed hard. Her hand took Ryouko’s.

“So, please…will you make me a woman?”

And Sakura put Ryouko’s hand on her chest.

“Can you feel my heart beat? It knows what it wants, and what it wants is you…”

--
“Well, whaddaya think, huh? Is this gold or what?!” Jiraiya exclaimed. “Man, you wouldn’t believe the amount of research I had to do for that! I mean, we’re talking hours here!”

Ryouko was blushing heavily, imagining this playing out in his head.

That would be soooo awesome!

“What the hell?! This isn’t even remotely realistic!” Ryouko yelled, still turning red. An image of closet-perv Ebisu ran through his head. He stifled his act.” It’s unrealistic, but it was easily worth my money. Just don’t tell anyone about this!”

Jiraiya smirked. “An extra 500 ryo would help me remember that…”

“I’m warning you…” Ryouko snarled.

“Now I SHOULD or SHOULD NOT tell her about this? Which was it again?”

Ryouko sighed and ponyed up the dough. What else could he do?
--

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