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Chapter 1 - Confusion of a child

the story of a neglected child

Chapter 1 - Confusion of a child

Chapter 1 - Confusion of a child
Childeren amused by fake smiles and false sincerity.
While you lounge in material serenity.
No care, no affection, you ignore him.
Used only as objects for your vain fixations.
You seem not to notice hurt him so.
He's calling for you, but all you hear is the sound of the cash register.
Confusion and pain, both evident in his face..

The question, uttured by him, scours the air, but never seems to reach your "Blinged out" ears.
"Does daddy love me?" but u provide no answer, no closure.
He soon grows, every year he understands more.
Now, he and his dad no longer speak.
The void..never filled..

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james13 on December 29, 2007, 9:02:56 AM

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james13wow...bro that was amazing...

Zenshii on December 18, 2007, 8:36:56 AM

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Zenshiiawww :( that's very well written I almost cried! :(

pacmaster2000 on December 15, 2007, 12:20:48 AM

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pacmaster2000yay

Kohakucrazy on December 14, 2007, 12:15:44 PM

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KohakucrazyI wanna cry now... Cuz that's how my boyfriend was...

Ranson on December 14, 2007, 11:59:25 AM

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RansonWow, that's sad. Great poetry

jeffhardy2345 on December 14, 2007, 11:27:11 AM

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jeffhardy2345Aw man tahts sad...

alchemest1 on December 14, 2007, 9:47:16 AM

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alchemest1Tear jerker mate. Sadly true. Stellar portrail.