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Confusion of a child

the story of a neglected child

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Chapter 1 - Confusion of a child
Submitted: December 14, 2007 • Updated: December 14, 2007
Word count: 111 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 178

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james13 on December 29, 2007, 9:02:56 AM

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james13wow...bro that was amazing...

Zenshii on December 18, 2007, 8:36:56 AM

Zenshii on (Chapter: 1)
Zenshiiawww :( that's very well written I almost cried! :(

pacmaster2000 on December 15, 2007, 12:20:48 AM

pacmaster2000 on (Chapter: 1)
pacmaster2000yay

Kohakucrazy on December 14, 2007, 12:15:44 PM

Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 1)
KohakucrazyI wanna cry now... Cuz that's how my boyfriend was...

Ranson on December 14, 2007, 11:59:25 AM

Ranson on (Chapter: 1)
RansonWow, that's sad. Great poetry

jeffhardy2345 on December 14, 2007, 11:27:11 AM

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jeffhardy2345Aw man tahts sad...

alchemest1 on December 14, 2007, 9:47:16 AM

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alchemest1Tear jerker mate. Sadly true. Stellar portrail.