Gone-poem
Submitted October 22, 2004 Updated October 22, 2004 Status Incomplete | a poem...I'm gone...nothing will ever be the same...they've killed me....
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Chapter 1 - Gone and never coming back...
Submitted: October 22, 2004 • Updated: October 22, 2004
Word count: 212 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 123
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ratbrat on October 22, 2004, 8:10:56 AM
ratbrat on (Chapter: 1)
gah!! ty!! ill try to make it sumtime ok!?!? Perhaps within the next week!!! Umm if you want to see more of my poems you are welcome to go here www.ratbrat.devianart.com and scroll through my gallery!! it would be great to see a story by you!! you are a very talented writer!!^^Rei_Anul_Sama on October 22, 2004, 7:26:57 AM
Rei_Anul_Sama on (Chapter: 1)
wow, it's as if your describing me! I've felt like this sooooooo many times before...in fact, i feel like shoot right now...anyways, this is awsome! can you make a poem titled "Here In My Arms"? It's supposed to be about a teenage boy who looses his girlfriend on a rainy day. she dies from a bullet and they were outside at the time of her death. He holds her as she dies and basically thinks of the poem. if you need another referense, i'm probably going to make a short story about them. if you have any ideas about names, i'm open to sugestions.