Chapter 1 - The Endless, Empty Hall
Submitted October 11, 2004 Updated October 11, 2004 Status Incomplete | It's a peom I wrote... Hope you like it!
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Chapter 1 - The Endless, Empty Hall
Chapter 1 - The Endless, Empty Hall
The Endless, Empty Hall
I turn left and I turn right
But I can't see where they went
I feel alone without them
But they don't care as much for me
I see no point in talking
I'm always somehow forgotten
I know it's selfish but I want it still
One of the three to be there
when I'm down without asking
Like I've always try for them
Like I said there's no point
I walk alone in a hall...
An endless, empty hall into the night
-July 15, 2004 [/b]
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ShadowOfDarkness on October 20, 2004, 3:38:22 AM
hey thats realy good, i like it a lot! makes you think...shigurelilflower on October 18, 2004, 9:49:49 AM
thanks and yea I should... I write them in this book I have and there are not that many but I can put more up if you wantPeril879 on October 18, 2004, 9:43:38 AM
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Hey! Peril879, 1# lover of Chichiri here! Oh frack I can relate to this poem...*laughs*You gotta write more! Btw, sorry I haven't posted in awhile. I just won a contest to get into this story I like. Anyway I love your poem!^_^Later, s.l.f.!shigurelilflower on October 11, 2004, 9:34:58 AM
thank you... I write a lot of peoms and I want to see if a lot of people like it cause if they do I may post more!DragonicFlames on October 11, 2004, 5:46:55 AM
I liked it, I really felt alone when I read it. Great Job! ^-^