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The Endless, Empty Hall

It's a peom I wrote... Hope you like it!

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Chapter 1 - The Endless, Empty Hall
Submitted: October 11, 2004 • Updated: October 11, 2004
Word count: 103 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 139

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ShadowOfDarkness on October 20, 2004, 3:38:22 AM

ShadowOfDarkness on (Chapter: 1)
ShadowOfDarknesshey thats realy good, i like it a lot! makes you think...

shigurelilflower on October 18, 2004, 9:49:49 AM

shigurelilflower on (Chapter: 1)
shigurelilflowerthanks and yea I should... I write them in this book I have and there are not that many but I can put more up if you want

Peril879 on October 18, 2004, 9:43:38 AM

Peril879 on (Chapter: 1)
Peril879Hey! Peril879, 1# lover of Chichiri here! Oh frack I can relate to this poem...*laughs*You gotta write more! Btw, sorry I haven't posted in awhile. I just won a contest to get into this story I like. Anyway I love your poem!^_^Later, s.l.f.!

shigurelilflower on October 11, 2004, 9:34:58 AM

shigurelilflower on (Chapter: 1)
shigurelilflowerthank you... I write a lot of peoms and I want to see if a lot of people like it cause if they do I may post more!

DragonicFlames on October 11, 2004, 5:46:55 AM

DragonicFlames on (Chapter: 1)
DragonicFlamesI liked it, I really felt alone when I read it. Great Job! ^-^