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Chapter 1 - Ayume's Birthday

I liked this song so I decided to make a story. Yes Ayume is my naruto Oc. And yes her and naruto like each other. Um I may cotinue it if enough people read it so uh yeah enjoy and do the comment thingy.

Chapter 1 - Ayume's Birthday

Chapter 1 - Ayume's Birthday
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Naruto gazed at the sapphire sky. Only one thing was on his mind.
When Naruto was little he had the spirit of a distructive fox demon named Kyuubi placed inside of him.
Ever since then he has been shuned by the people of his village. He didn't
have anybody. Endless days of crying to himself and no one to comfort or understand him. Naruto stood up and stretched his arms.
"I wonder where she is" He said to himself Ayume. She was the first person to befriend him the first person who could actuallly understand him. Naruto never has had a friend like her. Happiness isn't the only thing that she brought out in Naruto funny thing is he has a musical side that noone ever knew he had not even himself. Thinking about the first time that he sung made him laugh.
"I need to find a song to sing to her" Naruto said to himself "Maybe Simple and Clean?" Naruto shook his head. Naruto closed his eyes and sighed.
"Hey Naruto!" A voice shook him from his thoughts
"Hey Sai" he said waving to the raven haired boy
"What are you doing here?" He asked Sai pointed to a nearby tree. Naruto looked and squinted trying to see what he was pointing at.
"I don't see... Oh" Naruto said finally seeing what he was pointing at. Two blue birds were sitting in the tree singing. Naruto looked over at the paper that Sai was drawing on.
"You drawing that for Ayume's birthday?" He asked Sai just nodded and continued to draw the blue birds.
"Why blue birds and sunflowers?" he asked "Because blue birds are her favorite birds and sunflowers are her favorite flowers."Sai said looking at Naruto
"You're her best friend you should have known that" Sai said Naruto scratched his head and smiled sheepishly
"I guess i forgot" Sai just shook his head and smiled. "I got it!" Naruto yelled "Got what?" Sai asked
"The song I'm gonna sing to Ayume for her birthday!"He said happily
" Which is...?"Sai said "Blue Bird" Naruto said Sai stopped drawing and looked at Naruto as if he was crazy.Naruto looked at Sai
"What?" He asked "Naruto, You do know that a girl sings that song." Sai said
"And your point is....?"Naruto said "Know what never mind." He said sighing Sai looked up and saw that the blue birds that he was drawing had flown away from the branch that they were sitting on. Luckily, he was done drawing them.
"Gomen Sai" Naruto said bowing
"It's okay I am done drawing them anyway" Sai said as he closed his notebook
"So what are you gonna do next?" Naruto asked Sai as they were both strolling throgh the street of Konoha
Sai shurgged. He didn't really know what he was going to do.
"Hey naruto!" A voice said and from the sounds of the voice it was Kiba
Naruto looked ahead and saw Kiba waving at him. He waved back.
"See ya later Sai!" He said running towards Kiba
"Okay" Sai said walking his own direction
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nextguardian on August 15, 2008, 12:54:36 PM

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nextguardianYou did a very good job, please continue :)

My only critique would be spacing. Something like this would be easier to read:

"Naruto, you do know that a girl sings that song," Sai said.

"And your point is...?" Naruto said.

Anyway, nice work!

sorakeyblader258 on August 16, 2008, 1:26:51 AM

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sorakeyblader258Yeah thanks for the comment and I'll space out more.