My Brother--Chapter One

Chapter 1 - my brother
Submitted: April 16, 2007 • Updated: April 16, 2007
Word count: 326 • Size: 1k • Comments: 14 • views: 554

Chapter 2 - my brother
Submitted: April 17, 2007 • Updated: April 17, 2007
Word count: 681 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 183

Chapter 3 - my brother
Submitted: April 17, 2007 • Updated: April 17, 2007
Word count: 122 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 183

You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment

tinystarkitten on April 16, 2007, 2:02:49 PM

tinystarkitten on April 16, 2007, 2:02:49 PM (Chapter: 1)

Wow. That's deep man. But that is a good poem. I know because I just had to go through a whole bunch of crappy poems to put into this book for school... Anyway, I digress. This is a very well-written poem. Gives the reader an idea into your feelings and sorrow. Great Job. He'd be honored.

HimuraKamatari on April 16, 2007, 11:58:23 AM

HimuraKamatari on April 16, 2007, 11:58:23 AM (Chapter: 1)

That is very well done. You convey your emotion very well. I wish you and your family the best.

HimuraKamatari on April 16, 2007, 11:58:43 AM

HimuraKamatari on April 16, 2007, 11:58:43 AM (Chapter: 1)

*favs*

DarkRedEye on April 16, 2007, 11:34:50 AM

DarkRedEye on April 16, 2007, 11:34:50 AM (Chapter: 1)

Wow thats very good, especially the emotion and meaning behind it,tugs at my heart strings.

fullnarutoZ on April 16, 2007, 11:08:10 AM

fullnarutoZ on April 16, 2007, 11:08:10 AM (Chapter: 1)

omg thts sad how'd your bro die? (srry if thts too personal)

frozen-tundra on April 16, 2007, 10:57:08 AM

frozen-tundra on April 16, 2007, 10:57:08 AM (Chapter: index)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! allie it is good and I will recomend u to everyone i talk to

trueleegoinginsane on April 16, 2007, 6:56:58 AM

trueleegoinginsane on April 16, 2007, 6:56:58 AM (Chapter: index)

HEYYYYY PEOPLE... COMMENT ...PLEEEEEEAAASE!