Chapter 1 - Human Emotions
Submitted April 8, 2004 Updated April 8, 2004 Status Incomplete | this is really kewl. i really like it and hope you like it too. its about what else Human Emotions!
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Chapter 1 - Human Emotions
Chapter 1 - Human Emotions
We wake and do
what we have to do
Some of us think life is great
others think life is full of hate
Some are goths
others are preps
some commit suicide
others live their lives in steps
There is no true emotion
amoung the human race
but that is so not the case!
yup it rocks dosent it?! well i hope u gusy and gals enjoy it and PLEASE COMMENT!!!
what we have to do
Some of us think life is great
others think life is full of hate
Some are goths
others are preps
some commit suicide
others live their lives in steps
There is no true emotion
amoung the human race
but that is so not the case!
yup it rocks dosent it?! well i hope u gusy and gals enjoy it and PLEASE COMMENT!!!
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xxKILLtheSYSTEMxx on January 2, 2006, 12:14:03 AM
when it said There is no true emotion amoung the human race but that is so not the case! it shouldve said there is no true emotion amoung the human race but that is not always the case...i dont know i just thaught it sounds better that wayShadowOfDarkness on September 6, 2004, 9:32:30 PM
that is one heck of a good poem! i really like it!pained_immortal on August 24, 2004, 6:26:13 AM
im so glad you have confidence in your work!Mini_Marine on June 13, 2004, 9:51:13 PM
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so truelrsims91 on May 8, 2004, 12:58:37 PM
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Great job on this poem it is kewlYasuko-Yume on May 6, 2004, 10:54:13 AM
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Sorry! that was me above! Well not really me its just Tay let me use her acount cause I'm new in all and shes my friend! sooo +favs like I saidTay on May 6, 2004, 10:49:56 AM
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I think it rocks! in fact This is very true! Congrat! this poem is going to be the first thing on my favorites!