Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted June 20, 2004 Updated June 20, 2004 Status Incomplete | um wrote this on june 2 2004
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
the world spins
but i am at a stand still
i wish for death
but it never comes
the hero i need
is nothing but a pill
no one will save me
for i am just a forgotten flower
left to turn black
and wither away
in pain
i've been sad lately. can ya tell? i like this poem i don't know why i just do
but i am at a stand still
i wish for death
but it never comes
the hero i need
is nothing but a pill
no one will save me
for i am just a forgotten flower
left to turn black
and wither away
in pain
i've been sad lately. can ya tell? i like this poem i don't know why i just do
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angel_writer on September 18, 2005, 9:42:33 PM
angel_writer on
itá a small poem but a great one keep going on like thatLanfear on March 22, 2005, 5:32:01 AM
Lanfear on
beautifully written! love it. l8er Lanfearps if you have time u could check out my poems etc i have way too many *lol* ;)
pained_immortal on August 24, 2004, 6:05:44 AM
wow... i can really relate. Zeke_hieis_girl on June 30, 2004, 7:37:10 AM
*bows* again you impress me with your work good job i want you to know i some times feel the same way and thats what drives me on to write, emotions give you the best results trust me i knowRaenaAngel on June 25, 2004, 1:13:46 PM
RaenaAngel on
great poem, it has a lot of emotion