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Chapter 2 - Into the Light

Just some random poems I made :3 I suck at poetry but... whatever! X3 I shall kill your brain with meh poemness!!!

Chapter 2 - Into the Light

Chapter 2 - Into the Light
Take off the cloth thta made me blind to see,
All the things you need me to be.
Whispers turn to shouts as the days pass by.
Now I'm running in the wrong direction and I don't know why.
Coal black tears stream down my face,
Please, Lord, line my path with lace.
I'm going to where the sun doesn't shine,
A lonely soul, a hapless mind.
Empty promises took me this way,
A few wrong slips are making me pay.
Repent, such a stron word,
As much as I try, I fear I'm not heard.
The deafening whispers of death and hate,
Try to cloud my only escape.
Lord, I fall to my bruised knees, begging for You.
I've been down this road before, so make me new.
Show me Your love and what it's about.
Let me beg for Your mercy,
Cry,
Scream,
Shout!
I want more than this world can offer,
More than the fill of a coffer.
Forgive me, Father, I know I've done wrong.
Fill my lungs with air and let it escape a song.
Please, walk with me in my darkest place,
No more walking alone for I'm in Your grace!
Black clouds clear the way,
Showing me a brand new day.
Lord, though I'm far from You,
I now know what I must do.
Spread your unfailing love to everyone I know,
Your promises as clear as a rainbow!
A path is cleared, no shadows in sight,
Now help me walk, dear Lord, into the light.

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Living_Dead_Girl on February 21, 2010, 8:48:31 PM

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Living_Dead_GirlI love how deeply in contrast this is to the first one.
I rather understand a lot of the things you mentioned, yupyup!
Like being silenced by hate and stuff.
Being nice to people is great, but they don't notice it as much as meanness, which uber suxorz.

xkibaxgirlx on March 2, 2010, 5:41:39 AM

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xkibaxgirlxI know right? One of my dear friends wrote a poem like that and I decided to write something similar :P But yeah, it does uber suuuuuck! :O

Falconlobo on February 20, 2010, 6:20:57 AM

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Falconlobothat was less insane then the first one but still nice^6

xkibaxgirlx on February 20, 2010, 6:27:44 AM

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xkibaxgirlxThanks again!

Falconlobo on February 20, 2010, 6:48:17 AM

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Falconlobonp^^