Poems that''ll kill your brain!

Chapter 1 - Discord on the Moon
Submitted: February 20, 2010 • Updated: February 20, 2010
Word count: 284 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 262

Chapter 2 - Into the Light
Submitted: February 20, 2010 • Updated: February 20, 2010
Word count: 265 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 217

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Living_Dead_Girl on February 21, 2010, 8:48:31 PM

Living_Dead_Girl on February 21, 2010, 8:48:31 PM (Chapter: 2)

I love how deeply in contrast this is to the first one.
I rather understand a lot of the things you mentioned, yupyup!
Like being silenced by hate and stuff.
Being nice to people is great, but they don't notice it as much as meanness, which uber suxorz.

xkibaxgirlx on March 2, 2010, 5:41:39 AM

xkibaxgirlx on March 2, 2010, 5:41:39 AM (Chapter: 2)

I know right? One of my dear friends wrote a poem like that and I decided to write something similar :P But yeah, it does uber suuuuuck! :O

Living_Dead_Girl on February 21, 2010, 8:45:38 PM

Living_Dead_Girl on February 21, 2010, 8:45:38 PM (Chapter: 1)

LOLOL I love how random eet is!
I noticed a couple of nice line breaks, and also how there's an animal of some sort in probably each clause.
I like how it looks like you just typed the first thing that came into your kind (which is prolly what you did XDD!)

Living_Dead_Girl on February 21, 2010, 8:45:53 PM

Living_Dead_Girl on February 21, 2010, 8:45:53 PM (Chapter: 1)

I meant mind, yupyup! =o

xkibaxgirlx on March 2, 2010, 5:39:40 AM

xkibaxgirlx on March 2, 2010, 5:39:40 AM (Chapter: 1)

Yep that's what I did! XD ugh I never looked over it so there's probably a ton of mistakes

Falconlobo on February 20, 2010, 6:20:57 AM

Falconlobo on February 20, 2010, 6:20:57 AM (Chapter: 2)

that was less insane then the first one but still nice^6

xkibaxgirlx on February 20, 2010, 6:27:44 AM

xkibaxgirlx on February 20, 2010, 6:27:44 AM (Chapter: 2)

Thanks again!

Falconlobo on February 20, 2010, 6:48:17 AM

Falconlobo on February 20, 2010, 6:48:17 AM (Chapter: index)

np^^

Falconlobo on February 20, 2010, 6:19:33 AM

Falconlobo on February 20, 2010, 6:19:33 AM (Chapter: 1)

LOL weird but funny^^

reminds me of the Light in the attic

and where the Sidewalk ends and such

xkibaxgirlx on February 20, 2010, 6:27:33 AM

xkibaxgirlx on February 20, 2010, 6:27:33 AM (Chapter: 1)

Thanks! :) That's what boredom does to me. I had to wait an hour at my church and I felt random soooooo

Falconlobo on February 20, 2010, 6:48:05 AM

Falconlobo on February 20, 2010, 6:48:05 AM (Chapter: index)

lol np^^