Chapter 2 - I don't have the key
Submitted October 2, 2007 Updated December 13, 2008 Status Incomplete | I write some poetry but not often, this is some of my work.
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Chapter 2 - I don't have the key
Chapter 2 - I don't have the key
I don't have the key
Blacker than night
Colder than ice
Mind is numb
Heart in a vice
The pain I suffer
Every day
Is forever hidden
And locked away
My past stays caged
Inside my mind
The only key
Never was this kind
Blacker than night
Colder than ice
Mind is numb
Heart in a vice
The pain I suffer
Every day
Is forever hidden
And locked away
My past stays caged
Inside my mind
The only key
Never was this kind
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crystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 10:52:41 AM
dude your awesomeaeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 7:43:57 AM
aeris7dragon on
is it just me or is this a despair poem?its good either way, tho!
zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 10:56:55 AM
now I wouldnt say that. these are just based off of childhood painaeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 11:31:06 AM
aeris7dragon on
oh i see! ya i could relate...or i would if i hadnt subconsciously repressed my memory...zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 11:36:48 AM
it would be hard for me to do thataeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 11:44:12 AM
aeris7dragon on
well this stuff happened about ten or so years ago...zerotimberwolf on October 28, 2007, 11:13:44 AM
oh okxkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:18:02 AM
xkaitlyn25x on
i really like this you should really be a poet!!alex772 on October 16, 2007, 9:15:12 AM
alex772 on
my past is a daze as i such for u hahah you good