Chapter 3 - Rage
Submitted October 2, 2007 Updated December 13, 2008 Status Incomplete | I write some poetry but not often, this is some of my work.
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Chapter 3 - Rage
Chapter 3 - Rage
Rage
My blood runs warm
My mind races
Like a destructive swarm
I cant change my past
But I can alter my future
The ship to my mast
You bottle up the rage inside me
You keep me safe
From the rage that binds me
My blood runs warm
My mind races
Like a destructive swarm
I cant change my past
But I can alter my future
The ship to my mast
You bottle up the rage inside me
You keep me safe
From the rage that binds me
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crystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 10:53:10 AM
DUDE KEEPZ ON GOING WITH THE POETRYaeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 7:44:58 AM
aeris7dragon on
aww i luv luv poems!!!! but could u try doing longer poems?and i forgot what a haiku is. can u remind me, pwease?
xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:19:04 AM
xkaitlyn25x on
wow this si cool!!!=]alex772 on October 16, 2007, 9:16:00 AM
alex772 on
deep go deepper if u darezerotimberwolf on October 16, 2007, 12:38:41 PM
why would I darealex772 on October 18, 2007, 11:22:10 AM
alex772 on
THE DEEPER YOU GO THE MORE STRONGLY YOU FEEL its not a bad thing but it gets you some times
zerotimberwolf on October 22, 2007, 12:03:21 PM
oh trust me Ive been diggingalex772 on October 23, 2007, 8:52:27 AM
alex772 on
oh how deep do u plan on going??don't get lost in the forest of memories you may lose yourself
zerotimberwolf on October 23, 2007, 10:11:35 AM
but one can always find refuge in the lake of guidance=)alex772 on October 24, 2007, 7:19:05 AM
alex772 on
your learning quick for some one who is just starting to dig deepmaybe i'll have to start a story of peoms?
zerotimberwolf on October 24, 2007, 12:28:37 PM
XDzerotimberwolf on October 24, 2007, 9:28:12 AM
maybe