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First Blood Love

This is about a human teenage girl called Onyix and a vampire boy Gabriel.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Boy Oh Boy
Submitted: March 22, 2009 • Updated: March 22, 2009
Word count: 855 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 294

Chapter 2 - Rain, Rain come again and again
Submitted: March 25, 2009 • Updated: March 25, 2009
Word count: 840 • Size: 4k • Comments: 11 • views: 255

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Oakstar123 on December 30, 2009, 1:58:36 PM

Oakstar123 on (Chapter: 2)
Oakstar123ohhh interesting. I'm not too big on vampires (hence, Twilight) but this is rather interesting.

LittleAlice on December 5, 2010, 8:39:37 AM

LittleAlice on (Chapter: 2)
LittleAlicelol i dislike twilight but i do LOVE vampires, only ones that show true vampire atributes though

LittleAlice on January 5, 2010, 2:31:47 PM

LittleAlice on (Chapter: 2)
LittleAlicelol
i dont particularly like twilight tbh

LilithVampireQueen on January 12, 2010, 7:47:14 AM

LilithVampireQueen on (Chapter: 2)
LilithVampireQueenGreat and intreguing! love it! :D

LittleAlice on December 5, 2010, 8:33:57 AM

LittleAlice on (Chapter: 2)
LittleAlicethanks :)

Kagome1011 on January 1, 2010, 12:13:28 PM

Kagome1011 on (Chapter: 2)
Kagome1011OMG I WANT MORE

LittleAlice on January 5, 2010, 2:32:30 PM

LittleAlice on (Chapter: 2)
LittleAlicehehe :)
u liked it?
i put this one on hold atm, i have a bit of writters block

darkwolfluv55 on April 23, 2009, 7:51:40 AM

darkwolfluv55 on (Chapter: index)
darkwolfluv55oooo. so interesting! i wanna read more! it reminds me of Vampire Kisses. awesome, cant wait til next chapter! :]

LittleAlice on April 23, 2009, 9:30:47 AM

LittleAlice on (Chapter: index)
LittleAliceYea it is a bit like vampire kisses
but i started writting it before i read the series (:
Thanks

darkwolfluv55 on May 19, 2009, 8:22:09 AM

darkwolfluv55 on (Chapter: index)
darkwolfluv55oh thats kool! :D

firesignbaby on March 28, 2009, 9:00:29 AM

firesignbaby on (Chapter: 2)
firesignbabyAH! I am sooo interested now! lol... I love vampires... especially vampire boys...lol =P

LittleAlice on March 28, 2009, 10:41:56 AM

LittleAlice on (Chapter: 2)
LittleAlicehaha thanks
isnt every1 interested in vampire boys?

firesignbaby on March 28, 2009, 10:20:26 PM

firesignbaby on (Chapter: index)
firesignbabyapparently, none of my friends in college! D:

LittleAlice on March 29, 2009, 12:48:49 PM

LittleAlice on (Chapter: index)
LittleAliceo im year 11
so i love boys lol

firesignbaby on April 8, 2009, 2:51:00 AM

firesignbaby on (Chapter: index)
firesignbabylol... boys are cool :P (I'm not a perv... I'm 16 so they're still boys in my college XP)

LittleAlice on April 8, 2009, 1:47:45 PM

LittleAlice on (Chapter: index)
LittleAlicehaha well im 15 and i think MOST boys are kewl...
most of the tym =]

firesignbaby on April 9, 2009, 7:44:04 AM

firesignbaby on (Chapter: index)
firesignbabysome of the time, when they aren't immature :P

LittleAlice on April 9, 2009, 5:36:03 PM

LittleAlice on (Chapter: index)
LittleAlicehaha yea
which they quite often r

firesignbaby on March 28, 2009, 8:57:24 AM

firesignbaby on (Chapter: 1)
firesignbabyAwesome :P

darkwolf333 on March 25, 2009, 2:55:07 PM

darkwolf333 on (Chapter: 2)
darkwolf333again great work. Oh i want ta know what happens

LittleAlice on March 25, 2009, 3:08:15 PM

LittleAlice on (Chapter: 2)
LittleAlicehaha u will have to wait till i have written some more then

hisgoldeneyes on March 24, 2009, 6:49:52 PM

hisgoldeneyes on (Chapter: 1)
hisgoldeneyeshey kathleen! great first chapter. only 1 problem, at the end u say applauded instead of appauled.

LittleAlice on March 25, 2009, 8:26:34 AM

LittleAlice on (Chapter: 1)
LittleAlicegrrrrrrrr o well i think people will understand that i cant spell =]
maybe u should proof read the next chapter before i post it?
thanks i knew u would be keen XD

darkwolf333 on March 23, 2009, 2:00:38 PM

darkwolf333 on (Chapter: 1)
darkwolf333oh nice start . Interesting ^^

LittleAlice on March 23, 2009, 3:32:27 PM

LittleAlice on (Chapter: 1)
LittleAlicethanks =]