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Just Your Average Hell-Hole

Missi can't wait 'till summer...but there's a long way to go...
Is it possible to actually make the best out of high school?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Killer Alarm Clock
Submitted: May 23, 2005 • Updated: May 23, 2005
Word count: 280 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 96

Chapter 2 - Snatched Papers & Big butts
Submitted: May 23, 2005 • Updated: May 23, 2005
Word count: 180 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 83

Chapter 3 - Romeo? Juliet? Murderous maid? Money?
Submitted: May 23, 2005 • Updated: May 23, 2005
Word count: 769 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 77

Chapter 4 - Janet, Jake, Brian, and LUNCH!
Submitted: May 23, 2005 • Updated: May 23, 2005
Word count: 543 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 69

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Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on July 15, 2005, 5:56:23 AM

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on (Chapter: 4)
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_Othat stuff about Missi and... *checks back* jake seems too planned, I mean, friends dont just quit being friends and if you like someone you dont just start spreading rumors. too cliched and you could have gone into more detail. and made it longer. b/c:
lunch isnt just: you sit, kiss once, reflect for a second and litsen to a clip of the awesomest song on the face of the earth, and lunch is over, without even noting the school's horrible food or eating it, b/c if it IS a hell hole, they would have some pretty crappy food.

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on July 15, 2005, 5:51:43 AM

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on (Chapter: 3)
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_ORomeo and Juliet with a demonic twist, very nice.
it moved a bit fast though. it seemed as if it went from A to B to F, in what seemed like no time at all.

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on July 15, 2005, 5:48:12 AM

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on (Chapter: 2)
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_Othat was short... took me like, three seconds, O_o

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on July 15, 2005, 5:47:25 AM

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on (Chapter: 1)
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_OSYSTEM OF A DOWN KICKS @$$.
you could have made this chapter longer and you could have put in a bit more desription.

animecheerleader on May 24, 2005, 6:10:58 AM

animecheerleader on (Chapter: 4)
animecheerleaderAwesome story sounds something like mine I love it chapter 2 is so funny.