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The moments emotion

Some deep thought given to time...It's sort of twisted and hard to understand so sorry if you got confused...



Chapter 1 - Time
Submitted: December 28, 2004 • Updated: December 28, 2004
Word count: 230 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 126


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Liedetector16 on July 18, 2005, 1:07:34 PM

Liedetector16 on (Chapter: 1)
Liedetector16I like this one. Like it a lot. I think i'll fav it. *favs* Past, Present, Future; I love that line, "why cry for what is no longer?" Love it!!!!!

unloved_poet on May 1, 2005, 4:43:17 AM

unloved_poet on (Chapter: 1)
unloved_poetwow...i'm like freaked out beacause I actually understand it!! usally when I read a poem I'm like 'what the heck' but this is as clear as water. And very true. I like it alot ^_^ Oh and thank you for the 13 comments you gave me. It kinda freaked me out at first lol

noamidaprincess on January 5, 2005, 12:08:10 AM

noamidaprincess on (Chapter: 1)
noamidaprincessThat is very deep. It's wonderful. Keep up the great words that flow that head of yours.

bishyboylover on December 29, 2004, 10:08:50 AM

bishyboylover on (Chapter: 1)
bishyboyloverHOLY shoot!!!!Damn!You really are better at writing then I am!I admit it too!Read my poems and you'll see what I mean by yours being a million times better!