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Chapter 1 - This little feeling...

WARNING: MAY CAUSE BRAIN DAMADGE

Chapter 1 - This little feeling...

Chapter 1 - This little feeling...
WARNING:MAY CAUSE BRAIN DAMADGE
 When I hear that song,
Ofyou and me,
 I wanna sing cuz nothin can go wrong.
Ugive me butterflies...
Ican’t write about u,
Myhands won’t let me,
Itmakes me worry...
 U give me butterflies...
 I blush when u look at me,
 I cry when i don’t get to be,
 The only one u wanna see.
 U give me butterflies...
 You take away my life,
 And take over my mind...
Ugive me butterflies...
Utook away my friends,
 And left me to end...
 Are U really there?
Isthis one big nightmare?
Oris it my dream...
Isaw u hug her, *why isn’t it me*
 I heard u loved her, *im sorry to know*
 U want her smile, *mine has left*
Shepasses u bye without a glance, *u ignore that*
 Even though I love u more, it's her u adore...
 She gives u butterflies...
 U think I don’t understand, *but uunderestimate me*
 U told me I'm too young, *I wish I were*
Uthink I wanna be alone... *I am*
 You GAVE me butterflies...
ThenI hear another just like me...
 He calls out my name and tries to get me to listen...
 I pass him to go to you...
 Who am I, or who are u...
 I’ve known him all my life,
 The one who's confused and pushed back...
Iloved him, I know him, He loves me like I loved u...
 I give him butterflies...
Hetells me to let it go,
 I can’t forget what I know,
 He catches me as I fall,
 He doesn’t hurt me at all,
 I wanna tell him about u,
ButI can’t hurt him too...
 He always wants to tell me,
 That I can tell him about anything... *whatabout anybody*
Hemakes me happy,
 I heard mine and his song,
 I wanna sing along,
 He dances with me,
 I now I’ve begun to see...
Hegives me butterflies...
Yeteveryime I forget u help me remember,
 So just tell me this,
 If I tried loving u again... Is it gonna hurt?U still give me butterflies... _______________________________________________________
Yesit was very long, but that kinda how I feel between these two people... Mark isthe "u" *the guy who first gave me butterflies and still does* andAndrew is the "he" *the guy who’s just like me* It's this guy I thinkwho is REALLY CUTE, Versus a guy that I’ve always known so yeah... You DONTever have to read another one of my poems if this gave u brain damage...

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Sesshomaru1111 on May 4, 2005, 8:08:23 AM

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Sesshomaru1111*Sobs* i am just like u i can relate 2 this poem!!! KIRBY!!!

forbidden_child on March 1, 2005, 7:52:06 AM

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forbidden_childNo Brain Damage! I love this poem I know how this feels. Very well written!!!

Neko_Amber on February 27, 2005, 5:49:41 AM

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Neko_Amberbrain damage? no i've always had it i belive lol, wonderful poem i love it, i no how you feel... spet i don't have a "HE" just a "U"... but any way great job again!

CatAstrophy on January 21, 2005, 7:10:06 AM

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CatAstrophyWhat about Jimmy and John and David and Billy?

chaoscontrolmage on January 13, 2005, 10:50:27 PM

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chaoscontrolmageI just LOVE this poem. It's so beautiful. I wish I would feel like this sometimes. Keep up the good work Como.

bishyboylover on December 28, 2004, 4:38:19 AM

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bishyboyloverOMG you are way better at writing than I'll ever be!!Besides,i can take brain damage as long as I get to read your work!!!

Como on September 14, 2004, 12:40:03 AM

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ComoYAY you guys are sooooooooo nice i thought everybody would think i'm a psycho for putting it up...^_^_^

sonika on September 14, 2004, 12:38:04 AM

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sonika<font color="orange">como this is AWSOME...you did a really good job on it

xSlipknotMunkEEx on September 13, 2004, 6:21:38 AM

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