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PLEASE READ! sorry, there really nice poems and i want a second opinion on them

commentin wudn't hurt either ^^

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Speak
Submitted: August 1, 2005 • Updated: August 1, 2005
Word count: 110 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 180

Chapter 2 - Life
Submitted: August 1, 2005 • Updated: August 1, 2005
Word count: 98 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 178

Chapter 3 - My True Bliss
Submitted: August 1, 2005 • Updated: August 1, 2005
Word count: 149 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 190

Chapter 4 - Your Eyes
Submitted: September 7, 2005 • Updated: September 7, 2005
Word count: 146 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 190

Chapter 5 - Your Love
Submitted: September 28, 2005 • Updated: September 28, 2005
Word count: 86 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 183

Chapter 6 - Glare
Submitted: September 28, 2005 • Updated: September 28, 2005
Word count: 125 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 188

Chapter 7 - Fatal Mind (request)
Submitted: October 7, 2005 • Updated: October 7, 2005
Word count: 172 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 219

Comments

Comments (18)

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Ollie_is_da_bomb on October 18, 2005, 9:46:05 AM

Ollie_is_da_bomb on (Chapter: 5)
Ollie_is_da_bombThat's a pretty poem. Keep writing, okay? You're good at it! ^_^

archeological-mania on October 7, 2005, 11:44:24 AM

archeological-mania on (Chapter: 7)
archeological-maniathats AWSOME!!
very nice job!!
i like the title too!!
your very good with rhymes. ^^
luv it!!
FAVS*
thanx
bye*

archeological-mania on September 22, 2005, 8:59:58 AM

archeological-mania on (Chapter: 4)
archeological-maniawell, i have now officially read everything you have on this site. ^__^
SO HURRY UP AND POST SOME MORE!!!!
lol.
but seriously, your a really good writer.
wanna be friends???

archeological-mania on September 22, 2005, 8:57:43 AM

archeological-mania on (Chapter: 3)
archeological-maniaawwwww...
this one is sad.
but still, you have are good with words and rhymes. very good!!
favs*

archeological-mania on September 22, 2005, 8:55:37 AM

archeological-mania on (Chapter: 2)
archeological-maniaonce again...very nice.
inspiring!!
favs*

archeological-mania on September 22, 2005, 8:54:00 AM

archeological-mania on (Chapter: 1)
archeological-maniahey, that is nice!!
i never know what to say about poems, so im sorry about the short and un-meaningful comment. -__-
but i do like it. ^__^
i just don't know what to say. lol.
favs*

Electra_Cheez on September 6, 2005, 11:43:57 AM

Electra_Cheez on (Chapter: 1)
Electra_Cheezyus, berry good poem! *applauds* but i think you should make it a song. O.o just an idea for you to ignore! XD k... bi
~Electra
ps HOOP-BLAH!!!

Kid_Kairi on August 26, 2005, 1:46:01 PM

Kid_Kairi on (Chapter: 3)
Kid_Kairiwow keep writing very deep and Dark i like