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Zukaang

This is a little bit into the firebenders master episode
it just came to my mind i hope you enjoy it :]

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Chapter 1 - Stuck together
Submitted: December 23, 2008 • Updated: December 23, 2008
Word count: 568 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 211

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AvatarFanZukoFanTOO on December 23, 2008, 3:10:15 PM

AvatarFanZukoFanTOO on (Chapter: 1)
AvatarFanZukoFanTOOOkay I'm not Zukaangian but you should just keep going instead of saying 15 minutes later or somethin, it gets boring

Ghostly on December 23, 2008, 3:27:54 PM

Ghostly on (Chapter: 1)
Ghostlyhey thanks for the help xD
yeah i could see how that
could get boring but erm
how would i decribe them
sitting in silence for
hours/15 mins..

Lollielord on December 23, 2008, 3:36:48 PM

Lollielord on (Chapter: index)
LollielordYou could write "They sat in silence for a least 15 minutes"

Ghostly on December 23, 2008, 3:38:33 PM

Ghostly on (Chapter: index)
Ghostlyhaha xD ok ill remember that next time i write a story