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Sacrifice

Ahehehe.... this is kinda my own made story
i maked this hard so plese comment and rate
1-5 stars only! if u dont under stand something in this story just ask.


dont forget to comment! pls!pls!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The War
Submitted: July 11, 2007 • Updated: November 1, 2007
Word count: 432 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 169

Chapter 2 - Death
Submitted: July 21, 2007 • Updated: October 30, 2007
Word count: 331 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 125

Comments

Comments (6)

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nextguardian on October 30, 2007, 2:49:38 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 2)
nextguardianThe last paragraph is my fav part *****

nextguardian on October 30, 2007, 2:48:47 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 1)
nextguardianAwesome concept, *****

Love2talk11 on October 3, 2007, 10:18:52 AM

Love2talk11 on (Chapter: 2)
Love2talk11Sweet! write more plz!!!!!!!
***** 5 stars 4 you!!!!!!!

gaaralover1 on September 7, 2007, 12:57:38 PM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 2)
gaaralover1This is good.. * * * * *... That's what I give.. 5 stars and two thumbs up! And a big huge congartulating grin. This is such a great story Haku17

KidRaccoon on September 2, 2007, 8:27:46 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 2)
KidRaccoon*****5 stars, Audrey-chan!!!!!!!!!! XD

KidRaccoon on July 11, 2007, 12:30:49 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 1)
KidRaccoonI love it, Audrey!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work, I give it 5 stars. ^^