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Her Last Thoughts.

I'll love you, even in death.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Not Worthy of a Mausouleum
Submitted: October 31, 2005 • Updated: October 31, 2005
Word count: 306 • Size: 1k • Comments: 12 • views: 365

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crazy_jamaican_gurl on October 12, 2006, 6:07:42 AM

crazy_jamaican_gurl on (Chapter: 1)
crazy_jamaican_gurlThat is very good...i like the line about waiting in Hell. Tis written like a masterpiece!

niou on January 13, 2006, 12:39:04 AM

niou on (Chapter: 1)
niouthis was my favorite line :
"Darling, will you be waiting in Hell for me?"
nice work ^^

orianajones on January 12, 2006, 12:31:49 PM

orianajones on (Chapter: 1)
orianajonesthis is really sad and seems to be about having the heart blinded by love. sad but beautiful
luv ya orianajones
p.s. thanks for the coment on *dance of tears*, i may colour it in.

TsunachiSpiritHolder on January 1, 2006, 9:40:17 AM

TsunachiSpiritHolder on (Chapter: 1)
TsunachiSpiritHolderso sad...i like it...greatest ever ^_^ heres a cookie *gives cookie*

dramaqueen101 on December 21, 2005, 10:42:16 PM

dramaqueen101 on (Chapter: 1)
dramaqueen101Love this poem! *favs*

CodeCrush on November 14, 2005, 1:00:18 PM

CodeCrush on (Chapter: 1)
CodeCrushWow....... again..... LOL, i gotta get something new up in my head....

dms_cheeseshirted_chorusneko on November 6, 2005, 11:29:11 AM

dms_cheeseshirted_chorusneko on (Chapter: 1)
dms_cheeseshirted_chorusnekoThat's beautiful, full of emotion, I heart it!*faves*

rinygrin on November 2, 2005, 2:08:54 PM

rinygrin on (Chapter: 1)
rinygrinGreat Job! =( sad yet pretty

Nessa51189 on November 1, 2005, 11:00:07 AM

Nessa51189 on (Chapter: 1)
Nessa51189I am so glad you can. I'm glad I am getting through to someone out there.

Immortally_Broken on November 1, 2005, 12:22:57 AM

Immortally_Broken on (Chapter: 1)
Immortally_BrokenOoo nice! It's creepy and sad but so good...My vocabulary isn't big enough to rhyme like that. Excellent poem/song thingy!