Chapter 1 - Not Worthy of a Mausouleum
Submitted October 31, 2005 Updated October 31, 2005 Status Incomplete | I'll love you, even in death.
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Chapter 1 - Not Worthy of a Mausouleum
Chapter 1 - Not Worthy of a Mausouleum
Her Last Thoughts.
Darling, why don't I feel the fever anymore?
Everything's as cold as ice now.
I can no longer breathe and my chest is sore.
But to open my eyes, I won't allow.
Darling, why are there murmurs of sorrow?
Maybe it's only my imagination.
My strength has left and there's none to borrow.
Oh how I adore this sensation.
I'm lying defenseless with no regrets.
Except that I can't hear your voice.
I never thought this is how I'd pay my debts.
But this wasn't ever to be a choice.
Darling, I can't remember anything from before.
All my memories are a blur.
I can vaguely see the visions of blood and gore.
No different than how we were.
Darling, why do I smile about being devoured?
Demon is leaving me a kiss.
The thought of sleep leaves me empowered.
For there's something here I'd miss.
I'm lying defenseless with no regrets.
Except that I can't hear your voice.
I never thought this is how I'd pay my debts.
But this wasn't ever to be a choice.
Darling, will you be waiting in Hell for me?
I know that's where we're going.
You're proof of love, you'd never tell to me.
Killing was your way of showing.
Darling, do you think we took the wrong path?
Because I'm content with this fate.
Maybe this is what they mean by 'God's wrath'.
Even though he was a bit late.
I'm lying defenseless with no regrets.
Except that I can't hear your voice.
I never thought this is how I'd pay my debts.
But this wasn't ever to be a choice.
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crazy_jamaican_gurl on October 12, 2006, 6:07:42 AM
That is very good...i like the line about waiting in Hell. Tis written like a masterpiece!niou on January 13, 2006, 12:39:04 AM
niou on
this was my favorite line :"Darling, will you be waiting in Hell for me?"
nice work ^^
orianajones on January 12, 2006, 12:31:49 PM
orianajones on
this is really sad and seems to be about having the heart blinded by love. sad but beautifulluv ya orianajones
p.s. thanks for the coment on *dance of tears*, i may colour it in.
TsunachiSpiritHolder on January 1, 2006, 9:40:17 AM
so sad...i like it...greatest ever ^_^ heres a cookie *gives cookie*dramaqueen101 on December 21, 2005, 10:42:16 PM
Love this poem! *favs*CodeCrush on November 14, 2005, 1:00:18 PM
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Wow....... again..... LOL, i gotta get something new up in my head....dms_cheeseshirted_chorusneko on November 6, 2005, 11:29:11 AM
That's beautiful, full of emotion, I heart it!*faves*rinygrin on November 2, 2005, 2:08:54 PM
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Great Job! =( sad yet prettyNessa51189 on November 1, 2005, 11:00:07 AM
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I am so glad you can. I'm glad I am getting through to someone out there.Immortally_Broken on November 1, 2005, 12:22:57 AM
Ooo nice! It's creepy and sad but so good...My vocabulary isn't big enough to rhyme like that. Excellent poem/song thingy!