Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted July 1, 2005 Updated July 1, 2005 Status Incomplete | inu's thoughts after kikyo pinned him to the tree...his final thoughts. please read and comment
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
Love in LIFE
My life is over,
i'm dead by her love
But i'll remember her smile
In the shawdows of my death
Our love came first
It always came first
And she was beautiful
But now I can't see her
I was blinded by my greed
and now I have nothing
but time.
My life is over,
i'm dead by her love
But i'll remember her smile
In the shawdows of my death
Our love came first
It always came first
And she was beautiful
But now I can't see her
I was blinded by my greed
and now I have nothing
but time.
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dulce on December 5, 2005, 5:36:20 AM
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wow very deep!great job!^^mikita_inugirl on November 17, 2005, 1:25:03 AM
Good job. I like the poem. Tommy_Boy on October 14, 2005, 7:18:54 PM
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OMG this is so sweet, i cant wait till u make more. Oh u made me cry *hugs plushie* (Favs)GIRL_WITH_DREAMS on September 29, 2005, 5:38:06 AM
omg that was so lovely *wipes tear from eye* keep it up as this is realy brilllove_bunny on September 26, 2005, 7:52:32 AM
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Beautiful ^-^Broken-Heart on September 21, 2005, 7:04:48 AM
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This is deep. If you need some ideas, look at my poems.They are almost like this one.Draco_chick on September 11, 2005, 12:15:53 PM
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very nice. *nods*Hawaiiancat on August 21, 2005, 9:28:14 AM
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this is good!!!myoathkeeper on August 12, 2005, 8:42:57 AM
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wow! that was sooo touching! I loved it!