Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted July 1, 2005 Updated July 1, 2005 Status Incomplete | inu's thoughts after kikyo pinned him to the tree...his final thoughts. please read and comment
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
Love in LIFE
My life is over,
i'm dead by her love
But i'll remember her smile
In the shawdows of my death
Our love came first
It always came first
And she was beautiful
But now I can't see her
I was blinded by my greed
and now I have nothing
but time.
My life is over,
i'm dead by her love
But i'll remember her smile
In the shawdows of my death
Our love came first
It always came first
And she was beautiful
But now I can't see her
I was blinded by my greed
and now I have nothing
but time.
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Narutos_luver_forever on January 26, 2006, 3:51:34 AM
OOOOH i really like this poem it's awesome!!!!scooter_girl_Haruko on January 25, 2006, 8:21:02 AM
hey my sis red tis. she wants to comment. here it ish: tis is scooter_girl_Haruko's sis i just wanted 2 say your poem is so sad and i loved it. .:cries:.scooter_girl_Haruko on January 25, 2006, 8:16:56 AM
wow! its reely touching. *cries* i love it. o ya im gonna e-mail ur bro and explain to him y i sent him tat e-mail. *cries some more*Razieljr83 on January 22, 2006, 6:57:40 AM
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Its very good!Alisa on January 20, 2006, 6:20:31 AM
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AWW, It's so lovely:D Little_Miss_Anime on January 17, 2006, 8:33:28 PM
Beautiful!Very...haiku-like ^^
raysbabygal on January 13, 2006, 6:29:29 AM
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aww this is so cute! *soob*if only kikyo heard this thought! ;)
_VBDz_ on January 11, 2006, 5:05:26 AM
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so beautiful! I LOVE IT The_Swayz on December 15, 2005, 8:59:22 AM
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That's a lovely poem ^-^kikyo1267 on December 13, 2005, 7:11:10 AM
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i love this you wite more please more like a story or something take look at my storys