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Chapter 1 - Untitled

inu's thoughts after kikyo pinned him to the tree...his final thoughts.
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Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled
Love in LIFE


My life is over,
i'm dead by her love
But i'll remember her smile
In the shawdows of my death
Our love came first
It always came first
And she was beautiful
But now I can't see her
I was blinded by my greed
and now I have nothing
but time.

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MelodicCascade on July 31, 2005, 10:37:28 AM

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MelodicCascadeits ... so ... touching! ::cries::

beautifully done!

TidusLuver on July 26, 2005, 4:52:13 AM

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TidusLuverWow ... THAT'S REALLY AWESOME!!!! KEEP UP DA GOOD WORKIES ^_^

LuLu_Bell on July 23, 2005, 1:39:46 PM

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LuLu_Bell*crys* SO BEAUTFUL!!!!i will put this on my favs and never take it off!

PimpShadow on July 22, 2005, 1:21:44 PM

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PimpShadowOh wow O.O

JamesMarsters on July 21, 2005, 12:55:09 PM

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JamesMarstersHi, just wanted to say your on my faves.

CranberryZorroRaz on July 20, 2005, 1:59:56 PM

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CranberryZorroRazThat's so pretty.. I love it!! ^^

Lanathae on July 18, 2005, 6:40:45 AM

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Lanathaeaww that's so cute ^^!

Muffin on July 17, 2005, 11:04:46 AM

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Muffinwow! is so pretty continue doing poems ;)