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Fleeting Love

I will paint you in silver
And wrap you in gold...



Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: August 10, 2005 • Updated: August 10, 2005
Word count: 134 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 191


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Trinity_Fire on August 10, 2005, 11:40:27 PM

Trinity_Fire on (Chapter: 1)
Trinity_FireWaaai, this one is definately +favs!!! XDDDD
I love the descriptive things you did... like, 'imprint of kisses' and 'paper to flame turned to dust' and 'melt with these tears' it's just so beautiful!!!!!
You are the best poet I have met. The things you write make sense. -_-;;;
I LOVE IT!!!!! ^___________^-

Dr_Postal on August 10, 2005, 2:09:39 PM

Dr_Postal on (Chapter: 1)
Dr_PostalSucky poetry? To apply this label to such an obviously heartfelt work is tantamount to insanity! This is an experience to be remembered for all time, an experience that will never grow cold.