Kenshi's Pokemon Journey

thanx

nice job your definatley getting better at writing stories^^Way to go machop nice hit on the^^

WARINING: Okay, I'm telling you, this comment is honest, not flaming. I can be alot meaner. (Breaths in) The rating is:
0/5 (Crap)

This one breaks some fanfic rules that are just a given, like spellcheck, using the right terms, and doing things too fast. You didn't even explain the battle. You sounded a bit like a rabid squrriel (okay, that was a bit mean, but it really did sound like that). Go to my list of stories and check out how to make a fanfic for dummies not really. It tells you what not to do. Here's my advice. Read some other fics (which, bye the way, thanks for the comment on my thing), and try again. I don't think you are totally screwed, everyone can write, except for illetiteates. Just try again, but first, read it, and see if you were a publisher, would it even be considered. If it'd be looked at and then thrown away after a board meeting about it, it's good to put on here. If it is burned, not just shreded, but burned, then no. That's all. Sorry if it came out harsh, but I'm just keeping quality control on the fic department, where tons of bad ones release every day. Bye.

thats kinda messed up...when he has nothing you give him 1/5 and then when he tries you give him 0/5? If your gonna do stuff like that, just dont comment at all....you could at least still give him a 1/5 and say it nicer like Symphoniaprincess...geez...it's his first submission EVER on FAC...give him a break

ok your getting better at it.now that was cool i'd give ths chapter 4/5 so just keep at it and you'll have greater stories in no time^^ooooooooo new attack to the pokemon world^^

That the best one ive hered thats gonna end up to be a 10/5 when you finish
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT STORY power9x is WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i have to agree with that^^

Ok not bad.i give it 1/5(crap for people who have a million great fics ok for a noobie in here)i have to agree a little bit with power9x u just have to do a lot of editing but it's not so so bad.if u've noticed my story i'm pretty new at it myself but no ofence u r a noobie.i sugjest going to other poeple's profile and look at their favs an gallery of stories as exsamples.

Dude, where the frack are the chapters? There is no chapters here, so my score (subject to change) of your story is:
-1/5 (Where the frack are the chapters?) If you haven't written it, don't put it up. If it was a mistake, correct it. That's all.
Aidan Aenima