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Mitsunes story

HA! i finally wrote it. it's going to be alittle slow at the beggining but as the story goes on it shall get more actiony.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - capter one: the mission
Submitted: February 21, 2004 • Updated: February 21, 2004
Word count: 926 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 659

Chapter 2 - Homecoming
Submitted: February 22, 2004 • Updated: February 22, 2004
Word count: 1537 • Size: 8k • Comments: 4 • views: 212

Chapter 3 - getting to the spirit realm
Submitted: February 23, 2004 • Updated: February 23, 2004
Word count: 1278 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 237

Chapter 4 - meeting Zatago
Submitted: February 27, 2004 • Updated: February 27, 2004
Word count: 1483 • Size: 8k • Comments: 2 • views: 241

Comments

Comments (11)

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crazy-hiei-lover on February 28, 2004, 4:21:27 AM

crazy-hiei-lover on (Chapter: 4)
crazy-hiei-loverGreat please continue :)

Yukiryu on February 27, 2004, 11:12:45 AM

Yukiryu on (Chapter: 4)
Yukiryu^_^ Love it! I do, really! Awsome! ^_^

kawaiiyouko on February 23, 2004, 7:39:49 AM

kawaiiyouko on (Chapter: 3)
kawaiiyoukoInteresting turn of events. Hope you update soon. :D

kawaiiyouko on February 23, 2004, 7:38:13 AM

kawaiiyouko on (Chapter: 2)
kawaiiyoukoSame as last chappie, same comment about the few spelling errors and such.

The plot is good; it's getting interesting. ^-^

kawaiiyouko on February 23, 2004, 7:29:12 AM

kawaiiyouko on (Chapter: 1)
kawaiiyoukoPretty good so far. ^-^ Asside from a few spelling and grammar errors, it's good. :D

Yukiryu on February 22, 2004, 9:32:37 AM

Yukiryu on (Chapter: 2)
Yukiryu^-^ Thank you for mentinoning me, arigato. *bows* WOO-HOO! AND IT ONLY GETS BETTER FROM HERE ON, AND IT GETS EVEN MORE ACTION-Y!

Setos_Girl on February 22, 2004, 9:16:20 AM

Setos_Girl on (Chapter: 2)
Setos_Girlhey please continue. I like this story. Queen how di you fo the heart thing?

queen_of_foxxes on February 22, 2004, 7:11:33 AM

queen_of_foxxes on (Chapter: 2)
queen_of_foxxesI LOVE IT!!!!!!♥♥♥♥♥ IT'S THE BEST FANFIC I'V READ SO FAR ON THIS SITE!! ^0^♥♥i can't wait for the rest!

kurama_pajamas on February 21, 2004, 11:04:18 AM

kurama_pajamas on (Chapter: 1)
kurama_pajamasWee, sounds interesting, Characters seem to be like themselves...something thats very unlikely to happen whenever i write something, considering i always tend to put them in situations they wouldnt be in, and then they all act goofy...which is mostly because of my personality...ah well, im workin on it

blu_tasogare on February 21, 2004, 3:32:17 AM

blu_tasogare on (Chapter: 1)
blu_tasogareVery good, good portrayal of the charcters, especially yusuke ^^. No one seems out of character, like mine usually do in my fan fics XD. Good job!

JakounezumiAnkonAttoKyattsuai on February 21, 2004, 3:12:27 AM

JakounezumiAnkonAttoKyattsuai on (Chapter: 1)
JakounezumiAnkonAttoKyattsuaioooooooo...suspenceity ^^...ur good at stories u can make them drawn out so its not all rushy...a tequnice i haven't mastered yet ^^;