Trinity

Submitted
January 9, 2007
Updated
January 20, 2007
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 2
Size: 13k
Words: 2,711
Comments: 3
Views: 682
Faves...: 1
Rating: 1

Choas begins as three girls are thrown into destiny that they did'nt sign up for. With their world turned upside down they must endure it together or all will fall.

I refuse to write another chapter untill I get at least one review.

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Category: Games » - by Publisher » Square-Enix » Kingdom Hearts series » Fan Characters (OC's)

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Sunrise
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 1198 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 196

Chapter 2 - Trinity- The midget trio
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 10, 2007
Word count: 1513 • Size: 7k • Comments: 1 • views: 181

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LilyClyne on January 23, 2007, 12:11:23 AM

LilyClyne on January 23, 2007, 12:11:23 AM (Chapter: 1)

The way you right the story is good Krii just dont put detail into every little thing that happends like we didnt really need to know that the dress was a lilac dress forgotten on a Vanity Chair you could just say "a dress carelessly left on a chair in the room" i like it just lower the detail meter a bit k?
~Yuri AKA Ayu

KriKizen on January 21, 2007, 4:23:39 AM

KriKizen on January 21, 2007, 4:23:39 AM (Chapter: index)

ok finaly someone comments, NOW !!!! for the good stuff......thats not here yet but will get here soon enough........goodbye.......*poof*

crazicat06 on January 20, 2007, 10:45:15 AM

crazicat06 on January 20, 2007, 10:45:15 AM (Chapter: 2)

Cool! I like this story! It's getting pretty interesting... Write more!!!!!!!!